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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: lines 1 to 15:
3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

Breaking news, teen with a gun at school triggers lockdown! Four children are dead seven more wounded. The shooter used his father's gun, purchased just four days before this tragic incident took place; guns kill innocence.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 1/28/2022 12:46:00 PM

Such a tragic incident, Emile:-( What a superb Yalto!

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/28/2022 2:39:00 PM

Thanks, Edward, we live in trying times my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/2/2021 1:33:00 PM

Amen! Emile. Excellent use of the Yalto. I salute you!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/3/2021 7:21:00 AM

Thanks, Milt, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.