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Breaking February

The day is filled with cracks, that spills into the evening s h a t t e r e d eggshells that can't be beared to be buried, only placed carefully with the dried leaves... A dog's fractured leg piercing the night air— a heart, that still crumbles, since it remembers ...fragmented windows that still spill tears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Date: 5/19/2018 9:48:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, kabuteng. Seems haiku'ish. Well done.
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Date: 5/17/2018 12:47:00 PM
Special thoughts--true poetry that cuts to the---wait for it.....brain---so very glad you honored my contest with this Nikko---because you seldom do enter any
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Date: 5/15/2018 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well done.
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Date: 6/22/2017 8:06:00 PM
Nikko, I found your short rambling very interesting. How we can be stuck on the same thoughts a whole year later!! Sure wish I had seen you in the states. and I enjoyed finding this new poem of yours here today.
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Date: 5/28/2017 8:50:00 PM
High energy filled poem, Nikko, thanks for sharing!
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