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Breakfast On the Lawn

The Blackbird bobs the lawn This early dewy dawn Cants his head left and right For the worm out of sight Down below a juicy worm Through the dark wriggly squirm He slides along without a care Unaware he is breakfast fare And the Blackbird hears the noise Strikes the earth with lethal poise Grabs poor worm by the tail Stretching, pulling, can worm prevail All together pulling, tugging The worm the soil hugging And then snapped in two The Blackbird thinks that will do Half for me and half for you And the worm slinks to grow anew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/10/2012 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature Daniel. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2012 9:40:00 AM
Hey! The early bird gets half a worm. Bummer! Enjoyed this one a lot. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:09:00 AM
Daniel, congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe
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Date: 2/5/2012 7:00:00 PM
Storyteller you have brought a smile to a face.
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Date: 1/26/2010 2:39:00 PM
Believe it or not, apart from the Eagle, Dove and Madarin Duck, i am fond of Blackbirds, nice piece Daniel >> James
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Date: 1/25/2010 5:26:00 AM
good yarn, enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 1/24/2010 9:51:00 PM
Nature poems are so very cool... u have described it perfectly.. great story in your poetry tonight... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/24/2010 7:38:00 AM
Your poem gave a perfect visual of the Blackbird eating the 1/2 worm. Nicely written.
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Date: 1/24/2010 4:43:00 AM
And he ate that fellow raw. Very interesting write that a little lad would love and introduce him to poetry that is grand. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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