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06.26.24

First poem Free Verse.

Second poem, in Quatrain.

Same poem, different form

Contest by Crystal Woods

Lone sailor on voyage in sea of life ! Started peacefully in calm ambient. Out of blue loud thunder in cloudless sky. Hidden icebergs bring continuous trouble. Sea of life turbulent where breakers roar. Tough journey, yet to proceed not to stop. Propel in tides - ebbs on rhythmic cadence. Boat sways violent on trough and crest. Life to wobble in thrill and in danger. Ignite your soul to illuminate path.. Life to explore, agress on confidence Responsibility is solely yours. Competence and devotion is your guide. Never to repent ! Never to regress. Sail and sail , let the night winds sigh behind.. Let the breakers roar ! Sail , sail all along. Accept the challenge: Meet eternity. In sea of life lone sailor on voyage Peacefully started in calm ambient. All on a sudden thunder to outrage. Yet to proceed without allowing rest. Sea of life turbulent and breakers roar Icebergs floating, nine times being submerged. Giant waves swelling, aqua mass in galore. Sailor propel in ebbs -tides chased by urge. Life to explore, aggress on confidence. Dedication and devotion are your guide. Waves dancing on crest and trough in cadence. Lone sailor sailing, night winds sigh behind. Not to get frightened, let the breakers roar. Not to lose confidence, you are so strong ! Not to regress , you are to reach the shore. Let the breakers roar, sail, sail all along.

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