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The hours have dissolved Like sugar in my many cups And, all thats left are Jumbled words and ideas. 9/5/21 Liberum divisa contest From The significance of table 8

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Date: 1/5/2022 11:22:00 AM
Thank you all for your appreciated comments, i hold them close.
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Date: 11/1/2021 8:06:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 11/1/2021 5:27:00 PM
Very descriptive, especially the metaphor of sugar dissolving, congratulations, John~
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Date: 11/1/2021 11:48:00 AM
Great description of a breakdown! Congrats, John.
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Date: 11/1/2021 9:39:00 AM
I love this poem! It's just the way I feel :) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/1/2021 6:43:00 AM
John, beautiful and congratulations on your win in the contest ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
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Date: 10/31/2021 12:29:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, i am pleased it gives transparency.
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Date: 10/30/2021 7:35:00 PM
This could express many things, and I like that ambiguity and the layers it paints ... nicely done on a well-earned eight place in this VERY tight winners field - I enjoyed this thoroughly. Blessings! - the bard
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/30/2021 7:36:00 PM
No other comments?? That's just crazy ...

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