Break the Mirror

From time immemorial, Man has been on an audacious quest, To unravel the mysteries of life! Like a mirror that sends back the rays, Falling on it, never letting them pass through, Disabling us to see what lies at the other end, We are hindered by a wall obstructing our perception, Of things beyond our ephemeral existence. When breaking the mirror, we will have clearer view, Of truth that which lies at the other side Don’t we feel restless even amid splendour, With an overwhelming longing, For something, we cannot name, Like one so homesick with an insatiable thirst For a home that lies beyond, but cannot see? Does it not point to the Truth that death is not the end, But the foundation for something new? When our bodies are laid to rest, How I like to think, our souls will be escorted, By the angels of heaven, the messengers of love Borne on a warm palanquin, Made of soft wispy clouds, Gliding through ether Listening to lilting melodies, And falling into a peaceful slumber, To wake into an afterlife Extending to countless eons No more pain, no more suffering! As blessed spirits, with all cravings stilled, We will enter radiant, Into the magnificent portals of heaven. _______________________________ March. 11.2023 ~ PLACED SECOND~ Break the Mirror Poetry Contest Sponsor- Unseeking Seeker
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Kauffman Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 1:12 PM
Your ability to see into the depths of an idea then articulate with the clarity of the mirror's reflection just amazes me Valsa! Which image or line do I pick to highlight? They are all simply amazing! Congratulations on your win sweet friend. Blessings a big hug. What a gift you are!!
Volumes Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 5:34 AM
Back with untold congratulations my friend. A deserving Win
DiMino Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 12:41 PM
Wow! Truly enlightened vision! " Like a mirror that sends back the rays, Falling on it, never letting them pass through" -- absolutely love this! All of the work outstanding. Blessings my friend. You are an inspiration. Oh, FAVE.
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 11:39 PM
Incredible writing dear Valsa, you are so very gifted <3
Salehi Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 10:21 AM
Indeed... life is an illusion.
Peck Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 9:56 AM
Dear Valsa, Such beauty and longing for that we cannot see. Maybe our eyes are only half-opened...I love the way you write. Good luck in contest!
Poet Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Valsa, your writing is magnificent, and you certainly belong in a prestigious setting. You did an excellent job of addressing the requirements of the contest while also demonstrating your poetic ability. Your entry is deserving of very high placement in the contest. Good luck
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 5:04 AM
a wonderful philosophical perception of life and death! Love ~ Mala
Kendrick Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 3:27 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest. They said that my grandmother on my biological father's side of the family said there were angels there all around her. I know that had to be reassuring to her on her death bed. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Buhagiar Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 1:11 AM
You argue your poem very well. Best fora win.
Volumes Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:24 PM
An exemplary poem, Valsa. You addressed the criteria of the contest perfectly and with poetic prowess. Beautifully done Valsa, this deserves to rank extremely high in the contest. Best Wishes.. Wen
Rolland Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:23 PM
this is veary deep and beautiful, to give faith in the "future", exquisite penning, have a sweet day yann
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