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Breadth of My Soul

i see you curiously watching me as i walk towards you your mind adrift like leaves of november aglow a flicker of moonbeams dance in the pools of your eyes as they gaze hopelessly into the depths of mine endless shivers run down my spine beneath the stroke of your fingers as they brush against me gently sweeping my hair from my face before a kiss a language unspoken through hushed words as your lips tenderly nestle against mine lingering in the breadth of my soul your whispers consume my once vacant thoughts with the echoes of giggles as you chase after me playfully until i fall into the depths of your love all over again November 29,2019 Love Me Like You Mean It Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/20/2020 6:13:00 PM

Congratulation of your win. One is truly blessed if they can find a great love once in their life. Hugs to you.............

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/20/2020 7:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Paula...i too think if one finds that sort of love they are truly blessed... hugs

Ronald D Thompson

Date: 1/20/2020 5:44:00 PM

Wow! Beautifully penned Sandra. Many congratulations on your contest win..Best wishes. Ron :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/20/2020 6:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Ron... blessings and hugs :)

John Gondolf

Date: 1/20/2020 1:48:00 PM

This is sooo beautiful and romantic, Sandy. Congrats on your well deserved first place win. Maybe one day I will learn to write like this. Hugs, John

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/20/2020 1:57:00 PM

what a sweet thing to say John but you already do write beautifully... thank you :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/20/2020 12:20:00 PM

Congratulation of your win in this contest my friend. Your beautiful poem ended up on top like it should have.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/20/2020 12:55:00 PM

Thank you so much Chris...i am honored to stand with you on the podium again :) hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 1/20/2020 12:09:00 PM

Beautiful dear. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/20/2020 12:54:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve... hugs :)

John Hamilton

Date: 12/2/2019 9:37:00 AM

Wonderful romantic write Sandy, this is great, a notable departure from the sadness...a refreshing change!

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/2/2019 9:46:00 AM

lol thanks...only because a contest required a love write...i do much better with sad themes i think... hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2019 2:59:00 PM

- A wonderful romantic poem, Sandra .... this time it's not the turkey :))) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/30/2019 3:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise...no turkey for the contest :) hugs

Hello There

Date: 11/29/2019 7:21:00 PM

Lovely...a fav :) hugs

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 7:36:00 PM

thank you so much my friend....especially for the honor of a fave... hope you had a great thanksgiving... hugs :)

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/29/2019 7:20:00 PM

Sweet and very romantic! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 7:34:00 PM

thank you so very much Matthew.... hugs :)

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 11/29/2019 2:49:00 PM

Beautiful, especially the line 'like leaves/of November' - best wishes for the contest!

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 3:30:00 PM

thank you so much Michelle... :) hugs

Ann Foster

Date: 11/29/2019 2:31:00 PM

Wow... You mean it... you do... Your passion and clarity are high reaching, but well within the grasp of your pen... Wow....

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 2:34:00 PM

ha, i have a very good imagination of how i think love should be... those that find a love like that are truly blessed, thank you so much my friend ... hugs :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/29/2019 12:13:00 PM

Whispers so tender--you know how to evoke romance my friend--lovely sensuous write from start to finish. Excellent entry for the contest, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 12:15:00 PM

Wow thank you so much my friend...i wasn't sure about this write or if i even captured the contest theme...it took days to write this one...my words of romance don't fall easily, glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the positive feedback Vijay :) hugs

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 11/29/2019 11:16:00 AM

I loved the reading of this.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 11:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Sunite...it took several attempts to get this one where i felt ok with it... i appreciate your thoughts on this one :) hugs

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/29/2019 10:19:00 AM

Romance is in the air, well written Sandra and good luck. Tom

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 10:25:00 AM

lol thanks Tom...i don't pen romance often and wasn't so sure about the piece...i wrote it twice, saved it, reworked it and posted it then deleted it...went back to the poems this morning and reworked them again... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 11/29/2019 9:44:00 AM

Sigh, romance flows from your pen softly and warmly, touching those fortunate enough to come across it while wandering these pages of soup. Breath taking my friend, leaving my mind and heart clinging to every word. Another first place finish I am sure for this deeply affectionate and desire filled poem.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 9:49:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend... been working on this a couple days... not sure if it's fitting to the theme, doubtful of first place...i don't do romance often so wasn't sure about it, posted it yesterday, took it down and reworked it...actually had two versions saved and tried to take from each... hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2019 9:39:00 AM

He’s a lucky guy! Hugs Rick.

Sandra Adams
Date: 11/29/2019 9:43:00 AM

ha, he's a fictional guy for the contest, but i think if i had a guy like that, i'd be a lucky girl... thank you Rick... hugs :)