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Breadcrumbs

Easy are the paths to follow when I'm young and fancy free, home is comfort, joy, a blessing, caring folks and constancy. My borders are the playroom, garden, narrow spaces, fledgling child, questions answered with a bear hug, nothing crazy, nothing wild. Later, as my frontiers widen, gone the band aid to placate, in the middle of confusion, far beyond the garden gate. Childhood greeting, pale and fleeting, life no longer black and white, paths collide and intermingle, as I ponder dark and light. Walking through the forest blindly, Hansel with no Gretel near, breadcrumbs are a cruel delusion, still my courage, stoke my fear. Faith and pride and resolution drive my journey on, because, though I've travelled many pathways, home is where it always was.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/18/2012 7:30:00 PM
There is such depth in your poetry, the analogies you use take your poetry out of the commonplace and give it powerful meaning that keeps me amazed! What a great way to find that home has so much meaning.
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Date: 5/17/2012 6:37:00 PM
wow! i love the whole hansel and gretel (and breadcrumbs!) metaphor of this poem but the ending just knocked my socks off! hats (and socks!) off to you, sir!
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Date: 5/17/2012 4:29:00 PM
Keith, good tale..David
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