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Bread

freshly plowed field rows stretch to the horizon birds feeding earth nurtures seed sun filters through broken clouds rich black gold golden blanket waves in the hot summer breeze harvest home silos tower year's bounty gathered again bread baking

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/24/2011 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara, on your well deserved win for your poem in Charles Henderson's contest "String Haiku". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/20/2011 7:07:00 PM
Brilliant string Hiku, dear Barbara. Many congrat's on your WELL DESERVED WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:19:00 AM
Hello Barbara, This is written as a beautiful story. I love it and can see each page turning. You are so gifted my dear. Congratulations on your win Lov, Shar
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Date: 2/15/2011 12:06:00 PM
Don't know how I missed this one earlier, Barbara. I like the way you take us from the plowing of the seed to the making of bread. A wonderful string haiku. Congratulations on your BIG win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/15/2011 8:28:00 AM
Wonderful Barbara, love them all:)) Congratulations...
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Date: 2/14/2011 10:31:00 PM
Wonderfully earthy, Barbara, reminding me of my days growing up in Iowa, the bread basket of the US. Congratulations on this wonderful series I somehow missed seeing!
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:39:00 PM
Congrats BG on your super win in the string Haiku contest with this brilliant beauty .,.enjoy,,
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:05:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara on your worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/14/2011 6:03:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Barbara
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Date: 2/14/2011 5:53:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara on your big win in this contest of Charles!Enjoyed your wonderful Haiku.
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:46:00 PM
I just love the way each one is so different, yet blends to the other...just wonderful, Barbara! Congratulations!
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:44:00 PM
yeah! wonderful just love it! Light & Love and Congrad's
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Date: 2/14/2011 4:31:00 PM
Loveluy sequence Barbara. Congratulations on your no. 2. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/12/2011 9:30:00 PM
These are four decently written and very descriptive haiku entries. Well done.
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:46:00 PM
lovely write, enjoyed reading these haikus,..p.d.
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Date: 2/1/2011 9:08:00 AM
Wonderful concept and content for the String Haiku contest BG .. great lines flow together for a sure winner my friend.. good luck with luv..
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