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Braving the Chill

Haiku- a skillful sentry... keen eyes-all senses sharpened blends in surroundings ~*~ Senryu- i can brave this chill not the below zero at home--- The snow queen’s domain ~*~ For John Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/14/2011 5:30:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comments on my writing Annalise. I wish you continued inspiration that you may always write and share your poetry with us. Love, Carol

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/1/2011 4:27:00 PM

Nice poetry! I believe the first one is a senryu. You stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is all to the good. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

John Freeman

Date: 8/30/2011 9:50:00 PM

Annalise, a belated congratulations on your certainly worthy poem's win. I have been so busy renovating my old home, I just haven't had time to do much commenting. Sorry. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 8/29/2011 10:01:00 PM

Wonderful approach Annalise...congrats on your win.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2011 6:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/29/2011 6:01:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of John, annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2011 3:07:00 PM

Stunning poem, Annalise. I guess now that winter is coming around again, you'll be back in "The snow queen's domain." Bad girl, you're supposed to let me know when you post something. LOL Just kidding of course. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn

David Williams

Date: 8/29/2011 1:28:00 PM

hey Annalise congrats on your win David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/29/2011 7:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in John Moses Freeman's "Natural and Beyond" contest Annalise. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/28/2011 11:50:00 PM

Congratulations on a great win. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/28/2011 11:36:00 PM

Congrats Annalise on your wonderful win with this poignant piece for contest theme.. hope u are doing well my friend.. miss u..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/27/2011 8:28:00 AM

What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Annalise. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 8/26/2011 4:45:00 PM

Beautiful poetry~~

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/26/2011 4:31:00 PM

Interesting combo of poems Annalise. Good luck to you in John's contest...