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Braveheart Secrets Spilt

just under his kilt slightly hanging at a tilt from the tip to hilt once great weapon starts to wilt highland dirk ~ covered in silt By David Kavanagh highland dirk = Scottish stabbing weapon

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2021 5:34:00 PM

this is great humor. WELL done.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/14/2021 3:28:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, it was quite a good laugh writing this, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2021 11:36:00 AM

omg lol not sure how this will fair in the contest but its number one with me lol:-) hugs Jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/26/2021 3:30:00 PM

Heya Jan, Those Kilts freaks me out, I have nightmares about them ha ha, I honestly was going to finish with Nessie popping out at the end, cheers David

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/26/2021 10:46:00 AM

Love the humor in your tanka, David! You gave us quite an image. Enjoyed. Best wishes, Carolyn

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/26/2021 3:27:00 PM

Ha, thanks Carolyn, it was getting out of control, at one stage I had the Loch Ness monster in mind as my punchline, cheers David

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/26/2021 7:56:00 AM

Nice tanka skillfully rhymed. Best wishes in the contest! :) Linda

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/26/2021 8:39:00 AM

Heya Linda thanks again for visiting, took a little bit of figuring out, hopefully it gets a mention, I enjoyed putting this one together, cheers David

Judy Ball

Date: 3/26/2021 7:43:00 AM

Nicely done David. One of my favorite historical figures. Good Luck in the contest. Hope it wins. God Bless, JB

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/26/2021 8:44:00 AM

Heya Judy I usually use the tanka style as default, if having trouble with a poem not working out, I’d be delighted with any placement, cheers David