Brainwash

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Written on May 10, 2025

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brave words falling from my pen fill the emptiness a page of white nothingness working on fantasies, erasing all the wars with thanks giving hope to the spirit who sees beyond the dreams to the touch a ghostlike memory revealing the promises lost, exploding in the thoughts brought to life in rich reds, flaming ginger mysteries of a soul who breathes light from her prayers silently exposing naked hearts, so rare her stars in her eyes the beating down sun, vibrating across the ruins of a tale where hope met faith and lived, excelled – a song playing in her head freedom from the darkness where rain stills and blessings hide beneath the broken hearts who once knew the meaning the beauty how did they last surviving the night’s dread darkness, fear, tears poured out for the moon stars winking is this truth? her memories blowing away the tune rhythmic sounds laughter then tears pouring out souls once felt the music in their spirit now they nearly bleed with the deafening speaking washing over the soul a soundless note roaring, blazing embracing the senses prayers, praise where is His light? fog rushes to meet my darkness praying it will fade beneath the sun’s gaze, then, in her eyes there is indigo skies burning away the past pain never lasts it comes in waves grieving tasting the gentle a soul who knows the light will fade but the past never waits it stays, stays, stays washing away the music, the beautiful with a touch hue of pure pleasure risking the dance a second chance brain washed by fate still the night fades into day and I say – life goes too fast, I hurry up and wait but the stars they still praise and so will I… this is my fate, I’ll always say God is alive – love it will survive and my heart, my soul know when to show the world the glow of a life who is defined by Christ – so He saves me from the sin, the shame the mindless fears, all the moments in prayer washing away what is past, overcast skies reveal the way to heal found in His light, the Son’s shining so bright!

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