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Brainstorm

Thunderclap of thoughts twirling swirling spinning faster frenzy of feelings headed for disaster black clouds building once again lightening bolts piercing flashing on stormy seas waves are crashing in my mind I'm everywhere and no where tossed about from place to place filling up with doubt tears stain my face they spill out like rain in torrents pouring down cyclone in my brain I'm up I'm down with thoughts that tear and confound pieces of my mind fall to the ground they scatter all around by winds of change as the storm rages on in my brain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/16/2009 12:50:00 PM
nice styling, though there is a lot going on in your mind. I hope it clears up soon!...beautiful write.....Maryam
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Date: 1/16/2009 11:47:00 AM
This is so full of torment..wonderful write though..I too like the format..it adds alot to the content. BG
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Date: 1/16/2009 8:10:00 AM
Very vivid discription of a Brain Storm. Well done!, Robin. Love, Lainie
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Date: 1/16/2009 5:10:00 AM
So much going on in this piece Robin. This is painful because I can feel the confusion and the torrents of anguish that resides in the head of this voice. Love the formation of the words, it lends to the theme of the piece. Great job my friend.
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Date: 1/16/2009 4:41:00 AM
The physical appearance of your poem adds to the confusion and chaos within your words. Clever title. Hope things clear up soon. Excellent write. Love, Shar
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