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Brain In Head Feet In Shoes-W

The way less traveled I would like to choose The beaten path offers no challenges indeed Steer my way with brain in head, feet in shoes There are no self- help manuals, no formulas The right for one may be another’s wrong road The way less traveled I would like to choose There are no easy answers, and no road signs It is a rocky path going through raveled end Steer my way with brain in head, feet in shoes There is a winding road that never ends Full of curves lessons learnt at every end The way less traveled I would like to choose Maybe on one will look at my life’s success I know may be the weeds grow up behind Steer my way with brain in head, feet in shoes On beaten way the individuality one may lose I believe I am doing something worthy deed The way less traveled I would like to choose Steer my way with brain in head, feet in shoes Dr. Ram Mehta =================================== Sixth place win Contest:" the way less traveled" In Honor The Rambling Poet

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Date: 10/5/2010 10:13:00 PM
Dr Ram wow & congrats on win... Luv/Best wishes... Hitendra
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Date: 9/10/2010 2:40:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments on my 1st poem..."the reality of a walk in the woods". I am a nervous novice, now slightly reassured ! This write is very inspiring...
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Date: 8/22/2010 12:45:00 AM
Nicely done, Dr. Ram. Congratulations!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/21/2010 8:17:00 PM
Very nice! Congratulations on getting a placement with this piece.
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:41:00 PM
Nice concept for this write very wise! (Don't get tight shoes though!) Light & Love
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Date: 8/20/2010 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Constance ~A Rambling Poet's~ contest "A Road Less Travelled~~". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:45:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in Constance's contest with this unique write and another super win for u my friend..to enjoy.. with luv..ciao..
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Date: 8/19/2010 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Dr. Ram! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2010 5:37:00 PM
enjoyed your poem Dr. the Villanelle I am not familiar with but it looks good here. When i get back to being inspired, I should like to attempt one.....yes with brain in head and feet in shoes..I like that.... also like doris's comment....very funny
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Date: 8/18/2010 10:38:00 AM
Excellent use of the villanelle form to describe the courage it takes to pursue life on a road less traveled. Best wishes for success in the contest, Dr. Ram. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/18/2010 8:44:00 AM
Piquant Villanelle that you have penned in this one for us to enjoy this morn.. I have not always let good decisions guide me but I hope maturity has helped me in that area..Sara
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Date: 8/18/2010 6:17:00 AM
I like you title...some days I feel my brain was forgotten at home and my feet just step to their own music.
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