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Riding the rail cargo blue sky's virgin eyes suddenly a ride on the wild side. Consumed like a passionate love affair first sneaking around then a box unbarred. There were several more boxes growing inside tranquil the rush rolled up on the cool side. Should I count the length of time? Should I not forget the first box I tried? I visited Salem, Newport how cool the breeze. Marlboro & Winston wasn't for me another box opened to my foolish feed. it was Kool for awhile till my mind seemed to freeze. So many boxes, many more did I breathe. Next a very slim box, but a journey long enjoying a mellow, vivacious breeze in the Virginia mountains high air so soft admiring a beautiful sky. After a short while it was time to move on just like the Old West Maverick was born. Shoot-in toot-in smoke so thick general warning the surgeon's threat. A life of boxes adorned the family tree It was the 2017 box that finally set me free. No longer boxed in, living life tobacco free. Quit smoking January 2018

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Date: 12/13/2019 5:21:00 PM
Enjoyed your creative writing . Very well done
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Date: 12/11/2019 2:57:00 AM
Love this poem, Yolanda! Hope you are going strong still- yes, health reasons are the best reason to quit smoking, hope your health has improved? This is a great poem- the title is creative, and the imagery unusual. Carry on writing! Warm regards,~~Aqua M~~
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Date: 8/2/2018 9:29:00 AM
Beautiful inspiration written in such cool prose, Yolanda. A wonderful poem thru and thru ... spoken w/liberating truth. Aurora bright write! May love light your path always.
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Date: 1/1/2018 10:55:00 AM
Good luck in quitting smoking.. Well written Yolanda..
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Yolanda Scott
Date: 1/1/2018 7:21:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. Very determined. Day one has not been too bad, definiteltly a mind thing. The poem will help keep me focused. Have a safe and Happy New Year.
Date: 1/1/2018 10:01:00 AM
It would be one of the greatest victories ever accomplished in life... Out of all addictions, the smoke box wears a crown upon its head...it would take you the distance as a living dead...Wonderful poem Yolanda...All the best
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Date: 1/4/2018 6:42:00 AM
Thank you Arturo. Three days in doing great.

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