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Bowl of Tears

Broken Heart Placed in a bowl of tears reconstructed Love exchanged for fears Healed Heart Returned to her chest stongly beating Joy now expressed Loving Heart Joyful tears in the bowl Another Heart Will soon be made whole

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Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/24/2012 12:04:00 PM

We all need that magic bowl of yours sometimes in our lives.....love this one! Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2012 2:32:00 PM

Available for your use any time my dear! I am sure we have both shed enough tears to fill it. Thankfully they have turned to tears of joy. Hugs back to you.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/17/2012 6:58:00 AM

Form is Rhyme the type of rhyme is called slip rhyme or half rhyme [tears/fears. chest expressed, bowl/while] only tears/fear is an exact rhyme ..Okies Light & Love

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/17/2012 8:19:00 AM

Thanks

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/16/2012 2:08:00 PM

Never really gave it much thought, worth considering. I am currently finishing my book and have tended to do the chapters based on specific life events and emotions/ topics. This might be worthwhile looking at for one additional chapter. Thanks for suggestion.

Vicky Tsiluma
Date: 11/17/2012 11:58:00 PM

Trail of Tears sounds wonderful. Work it.

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/16/2012 1:42:00 PM

The title captured my eyes, and the poem captured my mind. (You know Richard, read with the others, its like a series, 'the tears series'(my mind is blank for a better word). I've seen some poets do part 1,2...of poems and I think it's something that needs to be explored. Who knows where it will lead? ..Nicely done!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/16/2012 2:10:00 PM

Perhaps I can call it Trail of Tears