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Bow Tie

She stood wearing nothing but a bow tie. Her skin was glowing in the soft moonlight. I had to look after all I'm a guy. Each and every curve was placed oh so right. A fantasy here right before my eyes. Her skin was glowing in the soft moonlight. As I gazed at her I increased in size. Looking at her face I knew she was pleased. a fantasy here right before my eyes. Moments often pass if they are not seized. Taking a chance I took her in my arms. Looking at her face I knew she was pleased. Bodies wrapped together I felt her charms. My very being melted into her. Taking a chance I took her in my arms. From that moment time became but a blur. She stood wearing nothing but a bow tie. My very being melted into her. I had to look after all I'm a guy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/29/2013 4:16:00 PM
Look and more by sound of it Rick, you is a devil lol. Very clever write, Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/23/2013 9:50:00 AM
Warm, sensual, and passionate!...Milt
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2013 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Milt
Date: 7/22/2013 10:04:00 PM
Oooh-la-la. You're the man my mother warned me against. lol. A sensual and smooth write, Richard. I like, very much and a tad more. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/23/2013 6:19:00 AM
I just love getting your comments, you have such a way with words. If I could fav comments many of yours would make the list.
Date: 7/21/2013 11:27:00 AM
Ummmmmmmmmm........hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......wow!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/21/2013 12:56:00 PM
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Date: 7/21/2013 10:59:00 AM
Unbelievable imagination you have. Nice wording and details. Love Colleen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/21/2013 12:56:00 PM
Thanks Colleen, glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/21/2013 10:31:00 AM
Wow Richard! You've mastered the form - and the message, oh so enticing. Very well done - I'm really glad yours was the poem I chose to click.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/21/2013 12:54:00 PM
Thanks Vicky

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