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Bow and Arrow For Contest

There once was a young man from Barrow While shooting with his bow and arrow The arrow went twang Like a boomerang And damaged his little cock sparrow. 4/ 27/ 2015.

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Casarah Nance

Date: 4/30/2015 5:36:00 PM

:-D whoa poor..sparrow lol

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 5:26:00 PM

Thankyou Casara, i can see what you mean. It makes one's eyes water. Thanks for your reaction. George

Judy Konos

Date: 4/30/2015 9:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 5:29:00 PM

Thankyou Judy,i very much appreciate.yoursupport of my poem. Cheers. George.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2015 11:18:00 PM

oh, this was a cute one!!! Congrats on your win.

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 5:39:00 PM

Hello Andrea, cute you say, more like acute for the man from Barrow. Thankyou so much once again for being so kind. So glad you liked it. George.

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/29/2015 8:02:00 PM

Ouch! lol! Congrats George! Kim :)

George Seal
Date: 7/15/2015 5:47:00 PM

Hi Kim, good reply,it does hurt i know from my owm experience in Australia. But mine was a golf ball. Thankyou so much for commenting on my poem. I really do appreciate it. Cheers. George.