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Written for the contest " My bloody Valentine " sponsored by Sara Jama, written to raise awareness on domestic violence and psychological abuse. 

Butterflies~ scarred and stained, breathe within a glass cocoon spun with black-widow silk and smoke, waving weary wings in the midst of nothingness, c h a i n e d with bleeding petals from a garden of grief, caught in gossamer greed, that feeds insidious seeds to this chrysalis heart, weeping in seething silence, as the world cares not to heed tunes of trauma, ricocheting through flutes of patience, oblivious to the p a i n they flutter upon fickle fields of Zeus~ a battlefield designed in crestfallen roses, a home that froze my desire to dream. O my bloody Valentine, bloody valentine, I see through your bouquet of bleached bones, wrapped with paper promises, perfumed with lethal potions to lure me back into the crystalline cage of a vindictive vulture, dressed as Romeo, armored with Cupid’s charm, f l i r t i n g with fragility in narcissistic grace… But must I forever be a prisoner of the sinister sun, carving my skin with poisoned rays? Or am I to remain mute in your mansion of malignant marigolds? For I feel the deceptive dews floating through those corpse-like eyes that seized the skies of innocence, dragging diamond-dusted daggers amidst wistful stars, leaving me unheard and unseen, while I scream through scorching stillness, engrossed in somber solitude, awaiting the delicate d a n c e of morning glows to caress the insomniac pillows I rest my fears upon, questioning the next wave of violence that would clothe me in nothing but deep blue~ b r u i s e s.

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Date: 2/15/2025 11:58:00 AM
IE, you do very well create the sensation of torture. Even while realizing the situation, it's very difficult to get out of. I can't help myself but think of us all (except oligarchs) now in the hands of our evil leaders and being abused terribly along with people all over the world. It's horrible, but can never remove our own personal connection to what's good and what drives a real society...like the ones we operate very locally. Smiles!!!
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Date: 2/15/2025 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in my contest. As always your writing has such depth and intricacies. Your descriptions of the fear of domestic violence are so perfectly portrayed in this piece. From the lines "But must I forever be a prisoner of the sinister sun," to engrossed in somber solitude," you can feel the desperation in these lines.
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Date: 2/15/2025 10:36:00 AM
Awwn grumpy look at you! Commenting! Im so honored! A chocolate worthy feedback for sure hahah thank you so much for the inspiration and for also placing my poem. I think this poem is closest to my heart now from my recent poems
Date: 2/15/2025 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations! Your poem's strong imagery, powerful metaphors, and a raw, unflinching tone create a profoundly unsettling and emotionally resonant experience. You've skillfully captured the complex and multifaceted nature of domestic abuse, highlighting the victim's struggle for freedom and their enduring hope for healing. "Bouquet of Bleached Bones" is a powerful and thought-provoking piece that raises awareness about this crucial issue. I can see this is precisely why it is a winning poem
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Date: 2/14/2025 10:44:00 PM
Masterful! Warmest congratulations and God bless.
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Date: 2/15/2025 7:39:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear seeker , truly grateful always for your kind support
Date: 2/14/2025 7:47:00 PM
Another beautiful piece! A brilliant theme with an important message! I feel the angst and know this is so many people’s story! I especially liked “ O my bloody Valentine, bloody valentine, I see through your bouquet of bleached bones, wrapped with paper promises, perfumed with lethal potions to lure me back into the crystalline cage of a vindictive vulture, dressed as Romeo, armored with Cupid’s charm, f l i r t i n g with fragility in narcissistic grace…” Congrats
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Date: 2/15/2025 7:46:00 AM
Wow this is such a beautiful comment and really left me heart full dear karen, poetic soul, thank you so very much always
Date: 2/14/2025 3:23:00 PM
When I read your works Inky. I feel seen, heard, understood. Like, like minds speaking the same language. when people write in metaphors, it gives the readers the chance to be in their world and cheer with a glass of red wine. It means they want to concentrate, read and understand. To see through the vocabs and tricky words, merge words to understand the poet's pov and concept. People say make your writing easy to write but is that the purpose of poetry? The early era of poetry existentialism-
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Date: 2/15/2025 7:49:00 AM
Wow same here and you speak what i feel dear sweet tonye, sometimes i dont want what i write to be understood, just by anyone, but it also feels good when one feels my poems, but i think there should be really no rules, as long as its free verse, if we are doing a form of poetry than it is a different story. I think what matters is how you feel after writing. I try to write a poem every day. It helps me and makes me feel relieved. And i do ir for me not for anyone else. And contest prompts inspire me to touch different subjects. I appreciate you always and i hope you will keep posting and writing please your poetry is amazing!
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Date: 2/14/2025 3:30:00 PM
Was made like this. Somehow it is still relevant and talked about. so why the rules? I really do love your piece and the efforts you put into it. You're one of the people that keep me here. I don't want to read a mere book, I want to read poetry. Funny enough, all the whole I was away. I was working on some collections and they made change my style of writing so it could be understood by everyone. It affected me dwelling in how I usually write poetry, limited my metaphorical creative spam. But for real. I don't want my poems to be understood by just everyone. It makes it cheap. I'm going to disappear soon for more work but I'll stick to how I like to write poetry. Congratulations on your beautiful win, my dearest love. "perfumed with lethal potions to lure me back into the crystalline cage of a vindictive vulture, dressed as Romeo, armored with Cupid’s charm."
Date: 2/14/2025 9:22:00 AM
So emotive yet elegant - congratulations on your well deserved win
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Date: 2/15/2025 7:50:00 AM
Thank you so very much dear dd. I am truly grateful for your kind support
Date: 2/13/2025 4:19:00 PM
This is going to be exactly what she wants to see in her contest. But I will still post mine just for the heck of it!
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Date: 2/15/2025 7:51:00 AM
Haha sweet andrea iv known her for long so i can sometimes assume what she might appreciate. But sometimes she surprises me too. Hahah Thank you always for your kind support.
Date: 2/13/2025 9:07:00 AM
Dear Empress, you so powerfully mirror the times. I hate watching news these days, hearing of domestic violence and similar cruelties men and even women inflict on others. Many women are made cruel victims of abuse. A woman who comes into a man's life, leaving her parents and dear home behind, expecting love and companionship, when treated as an animal, becomes a caged bird. At least she should be seen as a human being, if not a friend and partner. The very opening lines are so arresting! Your poem has given voice to the voiceless.... the silent victims. This is a testament to the struggles many suffer and your pen possesses greater sharpness than a knife on addressing the bloody valentines around us. A house should become a safe space for a wife or a woman, not a slaughter house! The ending....! Oh how sharp it is and how powerfully you have delineated the gravity of the situation. Hats off my Empress!
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:20:00 AM
Your comment made my day! Thank you so much always for taking time to read and leave such thoughtful comments, grateful really always for your poetic presence
Date: 2/12/2025 8:04:00 AM
"as the world cares not to heed tunes of trauma," -- distracted by hunger and fear...by great wealth protection as well -- both what we have and don't have can equally crowd out our gods and their dutiful angels. Stifle our immortality for a quick soulful fix. "dressed as Romeo, armored with Cupid’s charm~ Addicts of the Lesser Ego indentured." -- Only the movies make the Devil ugly, unappealing. love and hate his choice of pathways into our forms, by route of desires, to reside and pump venom into one's soul. Again just too much in your fine words to unpack in a brief comment, and yet do the poem justice. Enjoyed very much my friend. Have a great writing day!
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:22:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful and kind response, i am beyond grateful always for your poetic support truly
Date: 2/12/2025 7:19:00 AM
Abuse should not happen, but it does. Such a sad thing to hear about it also. Sometimes it even leads to murder. It is a pity that people who are prone to doing this physical, psychological or emotional abuse could not be recognized early in life and get help so that their situation/s could be addressed and remedied. Sara K
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Date: 2/15/2025 8:25:00 AM
Such a thoughtful and profound comment dear sara, so true, and it is so sad to witness and to see it still happens to many in silence.. sigh . Appreciate your feedback truly
Date: 2/12/2025 6:57:00 AM
Dear Empress, How haunting and beautifully tortured. You words capture such a dark, intricate dance of pain and longing, wrapped in such delicate imagery. I can tell that your mind really spent time meticulously crafting, pulling me and the readers into the web of emotion. O' the agony of the butterfly trapped in the glass cocoon, the suffocating beauty of the flowers and roses and marigolds they all of it strike deep, leaving me stunned and introspective. You’ve made trauma, grief, and longing feel tactile and real. Truly, a masterpiece of expression. Haunting FAV! Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel ,
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Date: 2/11/2025 1:35:00 PM
"to caress the insomniac pillows I rest my fears upon, questioning the next wave of violence that would clothe me in nothing but deep blue~ b r u i s e s." This is deep, and beautiful - I am sorry for your heart. Keep writing, <3
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Date: 2/11/2025 11:29:00 PM
Thank you sweet paige, it isnt about me but appreciate your kind comment as always
Date: 2/11/2025 11:25:00 AM
Your metaphoric language breaks the sound barrier. Your use of alliteration is not random, but cleverly used. Butterflies~ scarred and stained - a great opening lines that depict so well the argument of the poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/12/2025 1:20:00 AM
Thank you so much dear victor for your kind thoughts
Date: 2/11/2025 11:22:00 AM
What an emotional write you have here. You truly can cover any topic. If only there could be more peace and harmony in this world.
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Date: 2/12/2025 1:27:00 AM
Thank you so much thats such a kind thing to say. Im grateful always for your support
Date: 2/11/2025 9:57:00 AM
Hello Ink, this has left me speechless, so many beautiful and powerful lines. this one : leaving me unheard and unseen, while I scream through scorching stillness, A great read my friend. Wishing you a great rest of the week ahead.Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/12/2025 2:16:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful comment, grateful for your support and well wishes
Date: 2/11/2025 9:11:00 AM
Butterflies.. scarred and stained, mmm breathe within a glass cocoon spun with black-widow silk and smoke, oooo damn papiiii that opening!!! weeping in seething silence, as the world cares not to heed tunes of trauma, yaaas come thruuuu alliterations!!! I see through your bouquet of bleached bones, mmmhmmmm child that’s rite u tell em!!! mansion of malignant marigolds..dragging diamond-dusted daggers … damn papi these alliterations r on fireeeee!! The flow n the heaviness of these lines r absolutely amazing!!! Powerful and poignantly woven!!!
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Date: 2/11/2025 8:55:00 AM
Insomniac pillows I do rest on .
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