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Written August 24, 2023
For Poetry Contest, “Pick-A-Title, Vol 38”
Sponsor,  Edward Ibeh

Sometimes, the night is very long- the mind caught up in endless throng; a bottomless depth holding fears the old, the new, tween whirling gears. A sleepless night- a living hell of swirling thoughts inside the spell of things done wrong or left undone- a bottomless depth of visions spun. Tossing, turning, begging for sleep yet, deeper, darker, down we sweep to solve a problem- answers find, then turn around and go back blind. Our thoughts so deeply spin around but never is the bottom found; a promise made to lighten loads as praying for some sleep explodes. So patient, at our sleep-time gate, this bottomless depth lies in wait to shove us into that vast place and rob us of deep slumber's grace.

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Date: 9/26/2023 4:23:00 AM
Amazing work, Sandra:-) I enjoyed it tremendously. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 8/25/2023 12:07:00 AM
All I can say is this poem really touched me, beautiful.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2023 6:51:00 AM
Thank you, Aysha, for your very uplifting comment. Sandra
Date: 8/24/2023 11:14:00 AM
I read this one and thought it is so very true about sleep and when we cannot attain it. So much sad truth my friend. Another fav too. God bless.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/25/2023 6:46:00 AM
Thank you for visiting my poem, Robert, with your very supportive comments and the fav. Much appreciated! Sandra

Book: Shattered Sighs