Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

- Bottle Of -

               I saw a man who made large sailing ships inside a bottle ...
              Large sails, the ship was fully manned and the flag was hoisted
                  I put my thoughts, feelings and words into a bottle ...
                              Slowly, carefully I filled the bottle ...
                       The thoughts, feelings and words flowed out ...









24.11.2012
A-L  Andresen :)

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Robert Nehls July 15, 2014 at 1:26 PM Very fine, Anne Lise. Your thoughts feelings and words were transformed into a wonderful poem. And the ship now sails. Very well written, my friend.... Robert. Anne-Lise Andresen July 15, 2014 at 1:31 PM - Robert, thanks for the nice visit and comments on my poem - "A Bottle Of" - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis April 3, 2014 at 9:06 AM Anne Lise Such a creative and sweet write. Thank you for the kind comment on my Umbrella poem. Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2014 at 12:57 PM - Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Robin. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan January 7, 2013 at 2:59 AM Very very nice Annie,,,, congratulations on the nice win,,,, you have a blessed day xoxoxo's ;} Anne-Lise Andresen January 7, 2013 at 6:37 AM Thanks for congratulations, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carl Fraser December 28, 2012 at 2:06 PM Congrats Anne, sorry im late reading this and me being a sailor and all, very nicely done,Blessings Carl Anne-Lise Andresen December 28, 2012 at 2:24 PM Thanks for congratulations,Carl - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome December 19, 2012 at 1:22 PM Wish you could send me a bottle. here's one full of love for you. best wishes great poem. Pete. Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2012 at 1:27 PM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Peter. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath December 9, 2012 at 11:06 AM Congrats on your win, sorry or late. It's really wonderful heart bottle. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2012 at 11:07 AM Thanks for congratulations, bl -never too late - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 6:02 AM Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Anne Lise. Love Carol Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 6:03 AM Thanks for congratulations,Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman December 3, 2012 at 3:07 PM Congratulations on your very imaginative win! Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2012 at 3:19 PM Thanks for congratulations,Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sean Goodwin December 3, 2012 at 9:02 AM Very nice work. A well deserved win for you. Congratulations! Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2012 at 10:06 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A December 2, 2012 at 6:30 PM Anne.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2012 at 1:33 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2012 at 5:26 PM this truly was one of your best and a well deserved win, COngrats, sweetie Anne-Lise Andresen December 2, 2012 at 3:28 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May December 1, 2012 at 9:48 AM congrats on a great win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2012 at 10:54 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 1, 2012 at 7:26 AM Big congratulations on your winning place Anne Lise, love it xx Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2012 at 7:27 AM Thanks for congratulations Mandy- oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2012 at 7:26 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Craig. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane December 1, 2012 at 4:15 AM A bottle for your thoughts instead of a penny....nicely put! Congrats on your win. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2012 at 5:10 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair December 1, 2012 at 3:16 AM Congrats on your win, Anne, like it!! Jag Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2012 at 5:09 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Seren Roberts December 1, 2012 at 12:28 AM Congrats I enjoyed your piem....Seren Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2012 at 2:29 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Seren Roberts December 1, 2012 at 12:29 AM Oops typo or i should say ipado. Should read poem sorry.

Debbie Guzzi November 30, 2012 at 7:14 PM See I new you were always a winner! PLease do write for my new 6 line contest on LIGHT Congrad's on your skillfull win! Light & Love Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2012 at 2:29 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Holly Moore November 30, 2012 at 6:01 PM Congratulations on your win! I love this poem..Hugs, Holly Anne-Lise Andresen December 1, 2012 at 2:28 AM Thanks for congratulations - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gail Debole November 28, 2012 at 8:30 AM Hi Anne - Yet another novel idea from the workings of your mind! Love it. - Gail Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2012 at 9:37 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Gail. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux November 27, 2012 at 3:35 PM It appears a mere bottle is incapable of holding back all that you have to say. I like your Poem Anne-Lise Andresen November 28, 2012 at 2:12 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Richard. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve November 27, 2012 at 2:32 PM I love this poem Anne. Your word flowed out fluidly in this penned piece. Sending smiles, Connie Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2012 at 2:42 PM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Connie. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Nickle Read November 27, 2012 at 11:54 AM I love the way you've written this poem, wow, it all works so well.......I think I'll just read it again. Love it! Read ;{> Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2012 at 2:42 PM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments David. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ajayi Angel-Simon November 27, 2012 at 9:59 AM Great poem Anne Lise... So deep... It tells me there's a minefield in me. It tells me to the adventurous in my thinking and perception of my milieu. Love. Angel. Also thanks for reading my poems... so encouraged Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2012 at 10:41 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Angel. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko November 27, 2012 at 8:03 AM Light poetry but deep words within :) thank you anne for your lovely visit to my haiku, glad to have your presence there :D - Hug, Yanny Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2012 at 10:41 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Yanny. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo November 27, 2012 at 5:49 AM This is very nice Anne. I would like to do the same thing. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen November 27, 2012 at 7:39 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Lucilla. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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