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Borobudur

O Borobudur, I shed my clothes to reach the winds of your dome. Each footprint marking life’s trails engraved in dampened memoirs Now, breaths enter an unlit mosque residing within me Rora Onna/ May 2, 14 Sijo In A Temple Borobudur Temple, Indonesia

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Date: 5/14/2014 4:31:00 AM
Hi Rora.. first line.... naked in humbleness as you come face to face with glory of the Almighty in His haven.. :) cONGRATULATIONS.. :) GBU, from olive.. :)
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Date: 5/13/2014 1:26:00 PM
RORA , Congratulations, in NETTE's, "SIJO IN A TEMPLE " awesome contest. <3 Love * LINDA
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Date: 5/13/2014 12:15:00 PM
my, rora..a truly uplifting and soothing verse for the soul ... warm congrats on your shining win in my contest.. huggs
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:53:00 AM
Well done! grats on the win :)
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Date: 5/13/2014 7:42:00 AM
Wonderful write Rora ! A great different take ! Congrats on huge win !
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Date: 5/12/2014 8:58:00 PM
Impressive imagery..Congratulations on the win, Rora
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Date: 5/12/2014 2:58:00 PM
Rora, this is such a deserved win! Enjoyed immensely. // paul
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Date: 5/12/2014 1:54:00 PM
Borobudur, really nice images in this one! One of my favorites! Congratulations on your win!
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