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Born To Die

Born to die The helm of life is yours to command Starts off sweet, before you know it goodbye *Grook?*

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/10/2010 8:00:00 PM
I like the message in this one, Sidney, but your second attempt was indeed a grook! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:15:00 PM
enjoyed could be a grook?? I am not sure.
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:05:00 PM
*grook?*<- lol i'm not sure haven't written one o.o but a lot of meaning in your great short poem
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Date: 7/10/2010 7:02:00 PM
Life is but a shadow. Well said sir poet.
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