Born Again

Impaled embers forsook damp crevices elongated wide orifices inhale poised pain wrapped in prideful Splendor. Sprint gallantly, reform denying absorbed death exhaling hope anew evermore proved extreme Brillance. Spread wide softly, overtake righteous screams whisper mist appear brightly Resilient.

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/16/2017 12:11:00 PM

Almost a hymn me.

Ronald A. Williams

Date: 10/10/2017 4:40:00 PM

Put together words nicely but we should never take the direct words of Jesus, "Born Again" in vain. Amen www.jesuschristvisitation.net

Ronald A. Williams
Date: 10/18/2017 2:55:00 PM

Hi Sona, remember the direct words of our Lord and Savior. What is born of the flesh is flesh. What is born of the Spirit is Spirit. This what I mean and the Lord also. We can never mix the two. Amen, www.jesuschristvisitation.net

Sona Wilae
Date: 10/18/2017 12:48:00 AM

Confused on how my rebirth after sexual assault is taking the title "Born Again," in vain. I'm a born-again Christian, and I've experienced a rebirth in many areas of my life.

Darren White

Date: 10/7/2017 5:32:00 AM

Hi there. What a beautiful Free Verse you wrote there (it's not Blank Verse). You have beautiful imagery in your words :)

Sona Wilae
Date: 10/8/2017 9:06:00 PM

10 syllables...Thank you! I love the critiques. I am so willing to learn the various forms.