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Boredom

Sometimes I feel boredom settling in like dust, Shrouded in the island of a single thought- Works to be done and lying unfinished. There are obligations one cannot wriggle out. As a housewife, I have to wake up early in the morning, To get the breakfast ready for the family And to do the sundry jobs- cleaning, mopping Loading clothes in the washing machine, ironing The soiled dishes piling up in the sink, After each meal, makes my head spin. In between, the telephone keeps ringing, And the doorbell keeps buzzing. I would really love to have a cup of tea, And sit and read the newspaper, relaxed. But what am I to do, when there is so much of work? Work and work with no one to help. On some days, it’s so hectic that I don’t have time to eat, Making my stomach grunt and growl… In truth, there is more work after retirement. Though I had hoped that once out of profession, I will have plenty of time at my disposal, And will be less ruled by the hands of the clock. But, as a full- time housewife, there is absolutely no rest. Besides, it is terribly boring to be confined to home, With an incarcerated soul, with no change of scene. Sometimes my feet go numb, climbing up and down, Going from the kitchen to the living room And from bedroom, again back to the kitchen One step forward is one step backward. Between small breaks, I must write poems for the contest, Read and comment on fellow poets’ works. These days, with age telling on my health, I strongly feel, I must slow down a bit, Otherwise, my life would end up in utter boredom, Or I may collapse with the strain of overwork. March.7.2023 ~ Placed First~ B. Forms and Words Poetry Contest Sponsor- Sotto Poet

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Date: 4/4/2023 1:30:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your feelings and life through this excellent poem my dear poet friend Valsa. I extremely enjoyed reading it. Take care always my dearest friend. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win! Thanks for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
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Date: 4/3/2023 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/story/ending. Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Date: 4/2/2023 11:10:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your poem is fantastic; it appears that every word is poetically written with rhythm from the heart.
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Valsa George
Date: 4/2/2023 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much for granting me a first place win . I am much delighted ! I enjoy the opportunity to take part in your contests !
Date: 3/11/2023 11:33:00 PM
Valsa this is an anthem for all busy house keepers. poetically written, correct in every detail. Flows like an undammed brook, and is truly wonderful. Well done my friend.
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Date: 3/7/2023 7:43:00 AM
These housewives should be honored and cherished, the amount of work to do all these things should not go unnoticed, nope can't end up in utter boredom, : ). Great, poems, wisdom, love and knowledge to share with all, what a gift you have in writing, greatly appreciate the time in your breaks to flourish us with your poems : )
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Date: 3/7/2023 7:05:00 PM
Thank you so much Stephan for your sweet words. Though I want to read more poems, as I don't have enough time, I just satisfy myself reading and responding to the poems of those who regularly read my poems. I cannot say that I am bored, but a little over worked. May God bless you..
Date: 3/7/2023 6:57:00 AM
You have to teach them to help you cook and clean. Just kidding-- I know the culture. I must say, don't think boredom will ever find you as long as you have poetry. Best to you, Valsa.
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Date: 3/7/2023 7:00:00 PM
My sons are away. Now we are alone. My hus is not adept at cooking or cleaning. He attends some other works. Then you know the culture.... ! The younger generation is different. They do not think that cooking or managing the kitchen is exclusively a woman's job. Thanks a lot Vijay.
Date: 3/7/2023 6:40:00 AM
Oh my, Valsa! That is a hard life. Retirement yet busy and bored. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 3/7/2023 6:54:00 PM
Life is hard for most of us. But there are pleasant interludes too. While working, I had a full time domestic help. Now I don't feel the need to have one. Thanks a lot Kim.
Date: 3/7/2023 5:37:00 AM
It's a gesture, but not just of good will. It is speaking the truth! I presumed poets of your skill were assured of their ability. I really don't see anything missing in your poetry. I can only judge on the emotional reaction or connection rather than form (because I'm not acquainted with the rules much) but like I've said before I've sometimes wanted to ring a bell or jump out of my seat and shout hallelujah or something of that ilk after reading your poems. Unmistakably skilled and heartfelt
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Date: 3/7/2023 6:51:00 PM
Thank you once again for assuring me over and again that there is nothing missing in my poetry. Dilly you are very kind to me. I am glad to see you leaving your stamp so fast here on this site. Have a great day.
Date: 3/7/2023 2:26:00 AM
Dear Valsa, you are in no way an 'ordinary housewife with average aspirations and abilities'! Aspiration wise you may keep things small scale but ability wise you could be published over and over (if you are not already). The other light that you shine is the joy that you bring! Beautiful poems and checking in on other poets to encourage and lift. You are very special Valsa, no doubt about it!
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Date: 3/7/2023 4:44:00 AM
Your effort to infuse more confidence in me is much appreciated, dear sweet friend. I started writing poetry quite late in my life, close to my retirement. So I always feel there is something missing in my poetry. When others assure me that my poems are good enough, I try to believe that. Your second visit and your words of assurance, I deem as a great gesture to fill another heart with joy. Thanks a lot Dilly.
Date: 3/7/2023 1:01:00 AM
So now you know why I feel bored. Great poem. Best for a win.
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Date: 3/7/2023 1:38:00 AM
To a great extent, I can understand, dear Victor. Let us think of those who have to slog to make a living even at a very advaned age. Thank you dear Victor for reading and commenting
Date: 3/7/2023 12:26:00 AM
Brilliant poem Valsa…..really enjoyed! Debx
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Date: 3/7/2023 1:35:00 AM
Deb, so glad you liked my poem. Thanks a lot dear friend.
Date: 3/6/2023 11:12:00 PM
I hope this is invention rather than description but it is a beautiful piece of writing which makes me wants to shout 'leave the housework, you are too brilliant!'
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Date: 3/7/2023 1:33:00 AM
This is not fictional, though there is a little exaggeration. Actually there is no time to feel bored, but responsibilities keep me pinned. I am not brilliant, Dilly. An ordinary housewife with average aspirations and abilities, but taking on my shoulders more work than I can handle. Thank you for your great compliment.
Date: 3/6/2023 9:43:00 PM
Your boredom, certainly brings out the poeticness in you Valsa. Love it. Harry
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Date: 3/7/2023 1:28:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear harry. Hope you remain healthy and happy .
Date: 3/6/2023 8:53:00 PM
Well described Valsa ~ hope boredom does not set in though. The seemingly mundane becomes delightful in the knowing that we can never cross the same river twice, thus retaining an orientation of astonishment and wonderment always.
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Date: 3/7/2023 1:27:00 AM
To some extent, it is possible, but not always, my friend . I try to see not to let the boredom come in. But exhaustion is there. Thanks a lot for your kind comment, Seeker friend

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