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Bored In Manhattan Nfc

A young broad was bored in Manhattan So got dressed in outrageous fashion She looked so out of place Wearing satin and lace When a cop shocked her with his baton The cop was amazed by her attire Many men were filled with desire She was such an arresting sight That much to her delight He took her home to warm up by the fire 6th December 2015

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John Williams

Date: 12/9/2015 8:47:00 AM

I like double verse limericks Jan----keep it up---you can tell more story--great work------John

Jan Allison
Date: 12/9/2015 8:59:00 AM

I love writing limericks it appeals to my sense of humour:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2015 4:23:00 PM

Been some time since I last read a jolly good limerick, and in the process got two for the price of one:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 4:24:00 PM

LOL Paul I can't enter the contest but thought I would have fun:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 12/8/2015 3:24:00 PM

What a lovely caring Policeman ;-) hehe!! nice one Jan :) ~~xx

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 3:25:00 PM

ha ha ha - I am saying nothing lol:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/8/2015 4:48:00 AM

SWEET Jan! I have tried to write these but to me they are so difficult. You did a great job on these!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 1:13:00 PM

Just for fun Connie I will not be entering this contest:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/7/2015 8:07:00 PM

G'day Jan... is there a follow up third verse. If there is, I'll bet the broad was bored in that too - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 12/8/2015 1:50:00 AM

ha ha ha in the interest of decency I will refrain from a third verse lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 12/7/2015 12:03:00 AM

lol made me smile Jan. Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:15:00 AM

then my job is done - thanks Michael:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/6/2015 9:37:00 PM

Sexy gals light most men's fires. Brought a big smile to my face my friend. I appreciate those that can write poetry that is funny too. Something I could never do..

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:14:00 AM

I try to write with humour Robert although some people don't appreciate my wit lol - just had fun here:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2015 7:39:00 PM

an "arresting sight" was that a play on the cop thing? heehee. I really enjoyed this. OMG, I just glanced down and saw my soul sister CAYCAY said the same thing as me!!!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/7/2015 4:00:00 PM

haha. you two are awesome!

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:13:00 AM

ha ha ha :-) Great minds think alike lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Caycay Jennings
Date: 12/6/2015 9:34:00 PM

Hey both of you - great minds lay in the same gutter! Hugging you both ... CayCay

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/6/2015 6:34:00 PM

Was the 'arresting sight' an intended pun? 'Cause it is darn clever. The entire poem is. Your sense of humor is a blessing to us all ... CayCay (so glad you're okay!)

Jan Allison
Date: 12/7/2015 1:13:00 AM

Yes pun intended CayCay as I can't enter the contest I thought I would have fun:-) hugs Jan xx