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Booze Patrol

Carrie Nation was renown for her scorn For the havoc caused by john barleycorn She wielded her axe causing dire consternation Wrecking bars with what she termed a "hatchitation" Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/23/2010 3:22:00 PM

grin BOY I haven't heard that name in a "coons age!" congrad's on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2010 5:29:00 AM

Congratulations Bob on your win in John Freeman's contest "Giggle Poetry Contest # 2". Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/19/2010 5:38:00 PM

wondrful win Robert! congrats to you!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/19/2010 2:57:00 PM

funny one, big number one!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/19/2010 1:56:00 PM

Bob, congrats on your awesome win in the contest. Enjoy the week ahead ;)

James Fraser

Date: 9/19/2010 6:06:00 AM

Many congratulations Robert on your win in John's contest, nice one >> James

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/19/2010 4:43:00 AM

Congratulations on this super write, Bob

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/18/2010 5:26:00 PM

Congrats Bob on your number one poem in the Giggles Poetry contest.. an awesome piece.. enjoy your top notch top spot luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/18/2010 5:13:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Robert

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/18/2010 1:35:00 PM

Another win, Sarge. Heartiest congrats. Awesome write. Have a super weekend. Ralphie

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/18/2010 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations once more, Robert! Enjoy your win with this fine Clerihew. Peace, Audrey

John Freeman

Date: 9/18/2010 9:06:00 AM

Oh Yes! One lady booze patron! Congratulations Robert on this unique job, on the #1 Clerihew, and thanks for your support. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/18/2010 8:03:00 AM

Did she ever end in jail? Congratualtions robert on your no. 1 win in the giggle contest. Love, Joyce

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 9/13/2010 1:22:00 PM

I'm sorry this comes late, Bob..But I do appreciate your kind comments. ...Thnx, Jimmy

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/3/2010 11:58:00 AM

Excellent entry, Chief. Good luck. Ralphie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2010 11:13:00 AM

Love it Bob H., enjoyed and good lick in the contes,..p.d.,,,, s- mail

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/2/2010 11:04:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest with this great write...Have a great afternoon filled with inspiration..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 5:25:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Robert. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I return. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2010 7:34:00 PM

Very funny, full of humors and well worded write for John's contest, Bob

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/1/2010 7:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this Clerihew, Bob! Just got in and stopped to visit. Thanks for your kind comments, always. Peace, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/1/2010 6:51:00 PM

funny one and congrats on tthe win!! GReat work!