Booze In My Pen

are you with me, you drowsy pen?…this world is a
freakin’  distorted place. we are  scribbling 
like mites in pillow fights:  dirty nails we have become ,
 contagious  as micro germs trying to make
sense of all the fake reality clinging to sleek fuzz,
pizzaz and all that jazz… ‘cmon, we are all  fragile.
we’re all gonna die. so why be drugged by 
penning  a Lindsay Lohan kind of intoxication? 
look at you, ink! swiveling like whims of  tipsy lines.

far too many blots on your made-up tip…
geez, those  pop culture digs scanning  cosmo hours
 with whisky gulps of idle entertainment, you know, 
 the scratch of feeble hands sucking  materialistic
greed. do you think you’re  rotten smart  in hurried
thoughts of instant gratification? this is for real, for real.

and listen up: have you written about the will of
a spirit for true love of self,  of flowers and others?
nope, not the kind you feel when  intoxicated phrases
are riddled with booze shots… life goes on, every second, 
every written word.  there's something 
unspeakably beautiful about it all...if only you and i 
can share the flow of some kind of wonder  without  greed.

 you’re wasted! pik-bam-boom, take my alcoholic
breaths to the top; see that there is no before or after. 
just one rare, pure “ now” moment:  damn it’s for real, for real… 
our lives are a good freakin’ thing, isn’t it? hey, you’re dozing off !


       ©

by nette onclaud
for Elliott Bowe’s Drink Drunken Pen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A   Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 7:22 PM
NETTE, CONGRATS ;-) WITH YOUR DRUNKEN ENTRY...XOX~PD
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June 1, 2012 at 7:33 PM
A belated congrats on your win Nette and congrats to your drunken pen! I hope he was able to sleep it off. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Brown Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Drunken Pen" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Nette congrats on your win...David
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 30, 2012 at 12:30 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest with this amazing drunkenpen!!CONGRATULATIONS!!!
Poet Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 1:28 AM
Aha...Lindsay Lohan....;) great intoxicating.Hahaha...Enjoyed this drunken pen write Nette.I have to try with one peg of........:)
Hunter Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 1:42 PM
A great drunken pen!!! I think you hit the mark.
A   Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 1:05 PM
Wonderful Nette.... good luck in the contest...pd
Kendrick Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Reads like a drunken pen win..Goooood luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by "Moonlight And Dragonflies"...I appreciate the unique review..Sara
Austin Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 11:56 AM
Amazing what will drip off the pen when one has a large bottle of some sort of booze on the table and something inflammatory on the hi-fi. Everything makes sense, and no sense, comes out kinda Charles Bukowski. Been a long time dry, but there was a day. Loved your, hic, fine poem. Love, daver
Sivey Avatar
May 22, 2012 at 10:56 AM
This is a fabulous and very inebriated write my dear friend! I really enjoyed this fine poem that is over and beyond excellence! I love how you spilled from one line to another, sometimes three or four! Killer write Nette! Great Work!!
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