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My granny was sick as a parrot She always liked that Steve Mcgarrett Her favorite show Hawaii 5-0 Was cancelled for football, Goddamnit As Hawaii she couldn’t afford Struck a pose on her ironing board ‘Jump up here with me And surf this wild sea And we’ll surf in the name of Jack Lord’ A committed silk bloomers wearer She gave a free shot to her carer He went very red And that’s when he said Your bloomers are still on the airer Written: 16 July 2022 Contest: Limerick Sponsor: Lisa YY

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2022 12:43:00 PM

haha. Great ending on this set, Terry. Congrats on the win. I did not even know more than one limerick was permitted to be used!

Terry Flood
Date: 7/27/2022 3:13:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. To be honest, it never occurred to me that we might be limited to one. Seems I got away with it ;-)

Terry Flood
Date: 7/27/2022 3:10:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. To be honest, it never occurred to me that we might be limited to one. Seems I got away with it ;-)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/20/2022 5:46:00 PM

Great Limerick Terry, an hilarious ending. Granny 5-0 is terrific. Congratulations on your win in Lisa’s contest… Belle

Terry Flood
Date: 7/21/2022 5:49:00 AM

Thanks, Belle. Glad you enjoyed. Terry

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/20/2022 6:36:00 AM

Very interesting poem. Great grand mother! Congratulations!

Terry Flood
Date: 7/20/2022 12:29:00 PM

Thanks, Christuraj

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 7/20/2022 3:02:00 AM

Congratulations, Terry for your first place win.

Terry Flood
Date: 7/20/2022 12:28:00 PM

Thanks very much, Subimal

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/19/2022 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write. Your granny should be on the Hawaii 5-0 show. Tell her a dress is not for the surf and the wild sea. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 11:52:00 AM

Thanks, Paula. Glad you enjoyed

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/19/2022 9:52:00 AM

lol I used to love that show Hawaii 5 0 , guess I'm giving away my age lol. Your too funny poem deserves first place. Way to go dear poet, Congrats !

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 2:58:00 PM

Thanks ‘Mystic’. I expect Hawaii 5-0 would look really dated now but I always enjoyed back in the day.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/19/2022 9:17:00 AM

Hahahaha I love it.. Congratulations on a well deserve first place my friend.

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 2:58:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. Glad you enjoyed.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/19/2022 6:53:00 AM

SO creative, Terry. A big congrats. Janice

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Janice. Funny how writing works, my original wording in verse two was ‘we’ll surf in the name of the Lord’…. Whooah… that just had to become ‘Jack Lord’. Surely a gift from above… for which I take full credit ;-)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/19/2022 5:20:00 AM

Way too funny Terry! Congratulations on your win! Linda

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 4:41:00 PM

Was it the ironing table that gave it away? You did a fabulous job with it anyway. I did read Excaliber and it is delightful. Oh so many nuances there LOL Linda

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 3:05:00 PM

I hadn’t seen the link to the picture so I thought it was a Limerick on any theme, so I wrote ‘Excalibur’. It’s near the top of my poems list. People liked it but no one mentioned my oversight… I realised something was amiss when I noticed everyone was writing about surfing grannies!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/19/2022 5:55:00 AM

Aw, too bad. Did you submit it under a different title?

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 5:50:00 AM

Thanks, Linda. I’m chuffed as nuts because I had to withdraw my first entry when I realised we had to base our Limerick on the picture. Terry

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/19/2022 4:50:00 AM

Hilarious, Terry: Congrats on your big win. 5-0 will never be the sam LOL Aloha, SuZ

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 5:52:00 AM

Thanks Suzanne. Unfortunately, it’s not the same since they remade it. Give me Jack Lord any day. Terry

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/19/2022 4:35:00 AM

congrats on your winning limericks, Terry. I wish the sponsor had made it clear that we could write more than one.

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 5:55:00 AM

Thanks, Jenna. My first entry was one Limerick, but I noticed a couple of multi stanza entries so I just took a chance. It was actually your entry that made me realise that the picture was integral to the contest. I thought, ‘why is everybody writing about surfing grannies?’ Well I re-read the rules and… oops!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/19/2022 4:06:00 AM

Cute! Congratulations!

Terry Flood
Date: 7/19/2022 5:56:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. Glad you enjoyed.

Jack Horne

Date: 7/18/2022 12:01:00 PM

ha ha ha, hilarious last line

Terry Flood
Date: 7/18/2022 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Jack, wasn’t sure if ‘bloomers’ was an international term, so I crossed my fingers and went for it. Terry

Jeff Kyser

Date: 7/17/2022 8:32:00 PM

I like this one, Terry. Reads like a winner to me

Terry Flood
Date: 7/18/2022 12:20:00 PM

Can’t help wondering if some of our younger members are scratching their heads, saying, ‘Who’s Jack Lord?’ Glad you enjoyed, Jeff.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/17/2022 10:54:00 AM

Lol, brilliant Terry, five O took me back a few years,where did it go. Tom

Terry Flood
Date: 7/17/2022 11:04:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. Actually, I wrote verse three first and the Hawaii 5-O thing came after. Had to withdraw my first entry as I’d missed the requirement to work with the image. They’ve remade 5-0 but it didn’t work for me. Hope you’ve got your ice cubes and parasols ready. Terry