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Bones Beneath the Tower

Inspired by Bob Dylan's "Mississippi" I was the backbone of your dream— ribs shaped into beams, my blood seeping slow, cementing your tower’s base. You promised a sky of stars, a rise beyond all shadows— but I was just a ghost etched in your blueprint, a whisper beneath your tower. We built forever on lies, stacking stones on my shoulders— I was your ground, your silent sacrifice, the shadow no one names. You spoke of freedom— but all I felt was the weight, a hollow echo in my bones. You spoke of love— and I swallowed the silence you left behind. Now the dream is dust, the sky a fractured lie, and I stand— an empty scaffold, a ruin in the wind. You vanished in fire— and I’m left to fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 5/27/2025 11:51:00 AM
Wow! Awesome take on the contest theme. Dylan is smiling
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Date: 5/27/2025 9:38:00 PM
Thank you so much! That means a lot—Dylan’s work has always inspired me, and I’m honored if my piece carries even a little of that spirit. Grateful for your kind words!

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