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Bonding

From fields afar with distant dreams and futures still unknown, two beating hearts with maybe schemes are feeling quite alone, but through the journey of one day their eyes met with a glance, and so together down one way they played the game of chance. Their meeting may have slipped them by to maybe never meet, and so their lives would quickly fly but never be complete, then wander down some different track upon a dreaded curse, where loneliness could see them crack, or maybe even worse. But now with time the closeness draws to intertwine their souls by opening up two different doors that only love controls, and life becomes two into one without a magic wand to melt together what is done which has produced the bond.

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Date: 9/1/2019 5:17:00 PM
oh this is a very lovely and thoughtful poem from you, LIndsay. Thanks for your visit to my poetry the other day.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/2/2019 6:21:00 PM
Hello Andrea … it is always a pleasure to read your work. It's diversity, easy to relate with, and about life in general works very well with me. I'm pleased you enjoyed this poem Andrea - Lindsay
Date: 8/31/2019 1:29:00 PM
Bonding should be everlasting - a splendid poem - love the lines 'and life becomes two into one.......... to melt together what is done'. Well penned Lindsay, a really lovely write! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/2/2019 6:17:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … once again, thank you for your forever positive comment. It's not my normal style but it appears to have worked out well - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 8/31/2019 9:02:00 AM
I wanted to start my day on an optimistic note so I am back to read this piece. Thanks for your visit and comment.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/2/2019 6:14:00 PM
And thanks for returning Richard - I will be returning to read and comment on many more of your poems - catch you soon Richard - Lindsay
Date: 8/31/2019 2:00:00 AM
i so believe in serendipity as if it were heaven sent... charmed by this enchanting piece where ties bind, lindsay... huggs
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/2/2019 6:12:00 PM
Hello nette … thanks for reading and commenting nette - I'm pleased you enjoyed this verse - Lindsay
Date: 8/29/2019 2:49:00 PM
Quite a change, but well done, indeed! Aloha! Rico
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/29/2019 6:20:00 PM
G'day Rico … yes, it is certainly a change from writing silliness, but that won't stop as you'll soon find out - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Date: 8/27/2019 2:32:00 PM
A bond we all need! Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/29/2019 6:17:00 PM
Hello Matthew … yes, a special bonding is something very special indeed - thank you Matthew - Lindsay
Date: 8/26/2019 11:28:00 PM
GREAT poem, Lindsay--well-written and moving. Janice
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/29/2019 6:15:00 PM
Hello Janice … thank you for your kind comment Janice - Lindsay
Date: 8/26/2019 9:08:00 PM
Wonderful! Well written. You are a great rhymer and tell a great story
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/29/2019 6:45:00 PM
Hello there Timothy … it's certainly encouraging to receive a comment as you have posted - thank you so much Timothy - Lindsay
Date: 8/26/2019 8:05:00 PM
I can relate, when I met my wife I knew right away she was the one. Now 26 years later I am still madly in love. I enjoyed your romantic piece.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/29/2019 6:42:00 PM
Hello Richard … it's always rewarding to post a poem and then receive a positive comment as yours is Richard - Lindsay
Date: 8/25/2019 2:48:00 PM
So romantically penned, Lindsay! Heartwarming! Best wishes, Gershon
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/29/2019 6:40:00 PM
Hello Gershon … thanks again for your positive comment Gershon - Lindsay
Date: 8/24/2019 9:34:00 PM
Romance swirls in your tale of two lovers destined to meet. Beautiful Lindsay! Your rhyme is superb as always! Have a great weekend! : ) xxoo
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/29/2019 6:39:00 PM
Hello Connie … always nice to receive a comment from you Connie. Always informative and positive - thank you Connie - Lindsay
Date: 8/24/2019 7:32:00 AM
A very romantic piece Lindsay. Tom.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/29/2019 6:36:00 PM
Hello Tom … thank you Tom. I don't often delve into this situation - thanks Tom - Lindsay

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