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We're running late, and we have to leave. "Come on" my mother yells as she's stressing more than I. While in a rush I hit my shin and feel I need to greave. I see my dog wag her tail as I shout "Goodbye." We're getting close almost there. And that's when I hear it as if it's shouting in my ear. And then i realize it's bombs as i think "Why there?" Then it hits me like a rock and i get a sudden fear. Grandma, Grandpa, even cousin Ash, are all gone and are never coming back.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2011 4:18:00 AM
A very sad but well written piece Rachel. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/28/2011 4:01:00 AM
What a scary situation, I hope it's not true. Your rhymes are quite nice in this piece, well done.
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