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Body of a Fallen Tree

within a pock, a lonely copse a one-time proudly standing duke lay collapsed a pearly corpse strewn, now stretched across a dyke no mortar, stone or brick to budge a single chain links an area no sleeves rolled blueprint for this bridge it’s not as grand as Knaresborough growing moss along its course this felted dew-born viaduct where mice, voles and squirrels cross the span, the trickle of a brook wind savage sword angrily killed the ogre leaving a gnarled, lost and forgotten auger

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/19/2023 6:59:00 AM
Wow! Thanks for sharing your work.
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/19/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thank you for your time, glad you liked it
Date: 10/19/2023 6:46:00 AM
Sadness at the collapse and death of this duke. A soldier felled, a corpse from the copse. I like your writing style, Clive.
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 10/19/2023 7:32:00 AM
Thanks, I wanted words that shared letters making them sound similar but technically not rhyming but seeming like they do, wasn't sure it was going to work but I guess it did, thanks for reading

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