Bobby, Billy, Belinda, Baby and Me

Bobby Brown threatened to knock me down
  but Billy Blues took off his shoes
  and with a barefoot blocked his fist
  just as it brandished my wrist,
  and even though they fought desperately in the rain,
  neither bothered to complain.
They boxed and kicked and blew smoke
  but neither even spoke.
Finally I cried, "Stop!"
  "Belinda is calling a cop!"
So bloody and bruised, Billy put on his shoes.
Bobby was so muddy he looked really cruddy.
And though I felt bad because Billy was bloody, 
  I was bound to boast to my friends
  how Billy had come to my defense.
And now Billy and me and baby makes three
  and Bobby is history!


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  Oct., 2016
"All Rights Reserved"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/13/2018 4:19:00 PM
hey, I found a golden oldie. this is adorable, Carol!!!
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Carole Duet
Date: 9/13/2018 5:17:00 PM
You sure did, Andrea. This one's almost two years old now but does our work really age...like we do? I'm hoping they live forever. Thanks for reading and for your nice comment. Carole
Date: 10/7/2016 8:21:00 PM
Ooo, I missed this one. Sounds like a normal night in the south to me. Lol Bobby Brown became a rap singer and married Whitney Houston. Just pickin' at you. A fun poem to read, Carole, kinda gets my juices flowing.
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/7/2016 11:29:00 PM
lol...You got it perfectly, Daniel. And, you know juice is good for you! Thanks, Carole
Date: 10/6/2016 11:01:00 AM
Very nice Carole loved all the alliteration and rhyme
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/7/2016 11:36:00 PM
Hi Tim! So glad you liked it. Thanks.
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Carole Duet
Date: 10/6/2016 7:59:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Tim, and for your nice comment.
Date: 10/6/2016 3:01:00 AM
Go Billy! Nice one Carole. /|\
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Date: 10/6/2016 8:01:00 PM
Thanks, Rick. I was hoping you'd like this one.
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