Blushing Dawn

blushing soft wet dawn
droplets shimmer on green grass
heady roses smile

butterfly’s heart beats
as nature plays melody
to the dance of leaves

soft beams gently meet
the summer morning beauty
as it fades to noon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/2/2011 1:35:00 AM
thought provoking.loved how eloquent the choice of words flowed. congrats babe.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 8:26:00 PM
I just knew it would rate high(est!!) Congraulations, Tahera!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 8:07:00 PM
lovely imagery Tahera, congrats on your win in the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Carol, Tahera
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 11:12:00 AM
Many congratulations Tahera on your 1st place win !This is an amazing write from you----kashinath
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 9:59:00 AM
Hello Tahera, This is written with such love and beauty, just wonderful dear. Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 9:48:00 AM
It's great to see you at the top, Tahera with this beauty. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honor in first place. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 7:00:00 AM
Congrats Tahera my friend on your first place win in Carol's contest with this elegant depiction in Haiku .... enjoy your top spot for an excellent entry with luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 6:31:00 AM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 2/28/2011 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your very deserving win in my contest Tahera. This was a hard contest for me to judge. Thank you for supporting my contest another will begin soon. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 2/26/2011 2:25:00 PM
As always you've chosen the perfect words. taking the reader to a time and place created by nature while evoking genuine emotion.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2011 7:48:00 PM
Excellent Haiku Tahera!Amazing lines here--liked it.-----kashinath
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2011 2:03:00 PM
All beautiful and serene, Tahera. Always, Annalise
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2011 8:41:00 AM
Gorgeous! Lainie
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2011 7:59:00 AM
Best of imagery in all three Tahera. A winner. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 2/25/2011 3:51:00 AM
These are so grand, best of luck in the contest~~
Login to Reply
Date: 2/24/2011 11:30:00 PM
Very pretty, Tahera! I just know it should do well in the contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/24/2011 10:06:00 PM
dazzling array of 'kus, tahera.. winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
Login to Reply
Date: 2/24/2011 9:50:00 PM
beautiful imagery Tahera, good luck in the contest if it's for Carol's Nature contest
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad