Blurred Edges of Us

I still think of that day, 
rain pitter-pattered gently around us, 
clouds were the color of gravel. 

Your smile broke through shadows, 
and our laughter mingled like gold. 

Paint splattered against a canvas- 
that's what we were. 

Unpredictability. Chaos. Adoration.  

Does any of it make sense? 

Does it not make you want to crawl out of your skin and sink into the what if?
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