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Blue Tanka

A traveler lost Far in unknown galaxies Afraid, uncertain Yet, fervent hope’s reborn When eyes behold one blue sphere ~*~

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 12:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win in Francine Roberts's contest "blue". A well deserved win Annalise. Love, Carol

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/15/2011 4:10:00 PM

this is very lovely! congrats on your 1st place win:)

Deb Wilson

Date: 2/12/2011 11:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place win with this beautiful write Annalise about the furthest traveler of all!..love,Deb

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/11/2011 5:28:00 PM

what an unexpected conclusion! very cool. Congrad's Light & Love

Kash Poet

Date: 2/11/2011 7:57:00 AM

Congrats Annalise on your 1st place win in this contest!Enjoyed your poem---kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/11/2011 7:36:00 AM

Congrats Annalise on your first place win in the blue contest with this awesome speculation and write luv.. a super exciting entry and win for a wonderful poetess with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2011 10:06:00 PM

wowie, way to go, I think I just read this last night! Congratulations, sweetie! LUv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/10/2011 7:44:00 PM

Awesome beauty this is Annalise. many congratulations.

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/10/2011 6:52:00 PM

I saw this one earlier, and I said it looked like a good one for Francine's contest. I was right again. Congratulations on your win.

John Freeman

Date: 2/10/2011 3:24:00 PM

Congratulations Annalise on your honored first place, Agape, Moses

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/10/2011 3:15:00 PM

absolute brilliance, Annalise. on a very deserved winner. Harry

Constance La France

Date: 2/10/2011 1:51:00 PM

A big congrats to you, dear heart, on your fantastic win with your amazing poem~~

Brandee Augustus

Date: 2/10/2011 1:39:00 PM

Love your fourth line! I think it rocks. Congratulations on your first place win!

George Aul

Date: 2/10/2011 12:50:00 PM

What a great poem for a winner. Congrats.....George

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/10/2011 12:08:00 PM

Hon, I told you this one was special! So pleased to see one of my favorite poems at the top of the winners' list, Annalise. Congratulations, dear. Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/10/2011 12:01:00 PM

Hi Annalise - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/10/2011 11:13:00 AM

annalise!! toppers as always!! CONGRATS for winning first place.. :) huggs, nette

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/10/2011 10:59:00 AM

Hello Annalise, This is simply wonderful! Congratulations on your number 1 win! Well Done. As Always, Shar

Joe Inka

Date: 2/10/2011 10:41:00 AM

A hope that one day humans feel this hope,congrats, well done

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/10/2011 10:38:00 AM

This is very uplifting :) Wonderful and very unique take on the blue challenge--super duper congrats on your first place win, Annalise :) -- nikko :)

Francine Roberts

Date: 2/10/2011 10:20:00 AM

congrats on your first place win in my contest, love this one

John Freeman

Date: 2/10/2011 9:17:00 AM

A quite interesting take on the contest, Annalise. Good luck. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

Date: 2/9/2011 10:21:00 PM

An amazing Tanka rekindling the hope within us---enjoyed--kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/9/2011 6:02:00 PM

Oh...I'm loving each one's unique twist to the contest! this is lovely!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/9/2011 4:18:00 PM

You know how much I like space and science fiction writes, so this terrific tanka goes to my favorites. Very creative approach to Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn