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migratory birds in blue sky... a hyperbola

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/9/2012 7:44:00 PM
Kashinath, I liked what you said about multi faces. It's so true. I don't know what to tell you about the kissing poem. Nikko is now gone from Soup. Maybe you could blow her a kiss telling her to come back!!!
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Date: 9/1/2011 6:48:00 AM
Hey there Kash, interesting write you have here.. soup mail returned ;)
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Date: 9/1/2011 6:15:00 AM
Very nice... its like a breath of fresh air. Crisp, clear and beautiful. Steve
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Date: 8/31/2011 10:47:00 PM
Kash, guess what? Hubbie just walked in from his long trip. I need to look up this word Hyperbola. I am sure it is something very significant to the meaning! CAn't believe I don't know it. I know hyperbolie but not hyperbola! See ya, Andrea
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Date: 8/31/2011 8:47:00 PM
It's all coming too soon but while it is here - so beautiful. I can see the geese on the wing.
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Date: 8/31/2011 3:23:00 PM
crystal clear view in these lovely lines Kash my friend.. on a clear day u can see forever was a line from an old Streisand song and this reminds me of the beauty of that song luv..
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Date: 8/31/2011 2:54:00 PM
lol, i'm waiting for the sched of my medicine intake, kashi! it's almost 1am there and you're cross-dressing, lol... huggs to ya! :)
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:53:00 AM
hey kash, vivid and clever, like it.. David
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:46:00 AM
Excellent writing Kashinath I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/31/2011 9:34:00 AM
Apt images, kashinath
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Date: 8/31/2011 8:43:00 AM
dang, really good, kashi... vivid artwords you got here! more..:) soup mail!...huggs, nette
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