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Blue Pool

blue pool of water rippling mirror lacy white flower petals floating dancing as the wind engages them soft fragrant breeze gently strokes my face eyes closed long deep breath moment savored
Charlieku 4-3-2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina Date: October 13, 2018

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Line Gauthier
Date: 12/10/2018 7:54:00 PM
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Lovely, PS. Congrats on your well deserved to win.
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/10/2018 8:25:00 PM
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thank you, Line :)
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Wren Rushing
Date: 12/9/2018 9:08:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win.
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 12/9/2018 9:49:00 PM
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thank you :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/24/2018 8:35:00 PM
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congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest..
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/24/2018 9:10:00 PM
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thx :)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2018 11:59:00 PM
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ha I just saw Jan said the same as me
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 AM
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:D
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/23/2018 11:58:00 PM
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back with my congrats. would like to have seen this one placed higher up!!!
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 AM
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Thank you, Andrea, for the visit and the compliment. :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/23/2018 3:17:00 PM
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Such beautiful imagery, I personally would have rated this higher:-)Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/23/2018 4:14:00 PM
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What a nice thing to say! Thank you :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2018 10:50:00 AM
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Lovely, PS. You captured an exquisite moment. Congrats on your win. A FAVE for me.
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/23/2018 4:15:00 PM
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I am so glad you liked it. That means a lot! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/23/2018 2:20:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, P.S. :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/23/2018 6:06:00 PM
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Thank you Anne-Lise!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/18/2018 6:16:00 PM
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I love how you did your set of these. One of the best sets i have seen so far.
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/18/2018 8:13:00 PM
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Andrea, thank you. You made my day :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/14/2018 1:24:00 AM
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P.S., Your imagery is remarkable, refined, and rippling.
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P.S. Awtry
Date: 10/14/2018 9:47:00 AM
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thank you, Caren!

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