Blue Pool

blue pool of water rippling mirror lacy white flower petals floating dancing as the wind engages them soft fragrant breeze gently strokes my face eyes closed long deep breath moment savored
Charlieku 4-3-2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina Date: October 13, 2018

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Date: 12/10/2018 7:54:00 PM
Lovely, PS. Congrats on your well deserved to win.
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Date: 12/10/2018 8:25:00 PM
thank you, Line :)
Date: 12/9/2018 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/9/2018 9:49:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 10/24/2018 8:35:00 PM
congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest..
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Date: 10/24/2018 9:10:00 PM
thx :)
Date: 10/23/2018 11:59:00 PM
ha I just saw Jan said the same as me
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Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 AM
:D
Date: 10/23/2018 11:58:00 PM
back with my congrats. would like to have seen this one placed higher up!!!
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Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, for the visit and the compliment. :)
Date: 10/23/2018 3:17:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, I personally would have rated this higher:-)Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/23/2018 4:14:00 PM
What a nice thing to say! Thank you :)
Date: 10/23/2018 10:50:00 AM
Lovely, PS. You captured an exquisite moment. Congrats on your win. A FAVE for me.
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Date: 10/23/2018 4:15:00 PM
I am so glad you liked it. That means a lot! :)
Date: 10/23/2018 2:20:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, P.S. :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/23/2018 6:06:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 10/18/2018 6:16:00 PM
I love how you did your set of these. One of the best sets i have seen so far.
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Date: 10/18/2018 8:13:00 PM
Andrea, thank you. You made my day :)
Date: 10/14/2018 1:24:00 AM
P.S., Your imagery is remarkable, refined, and rippling.
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Date: 10/14/2018 9:47:00 AM
thank you, Caren!
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