P.S. Awtry Poet Haiku

Blue Pool

blue pool
of water
rippling mirror 

lacy white 
flower petals
floating 

dancing 
as the wind
engages them

soft fragrant breeze
gently strokes
my face

eyes closed
long deep breath
moment savored




Charlieku 4-3-2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Charles Messina
Date:  October 13, 2018

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Line Gauthier December 10, 2018 at 7:54 PM Lovely, PS. Congrats on your well deserved to win. P.S. Awtry December 10, 2018 at 8:25 PM thank you, Line :)

Wren Rushing December 9, 2018 at 9:08 PM Congratulations on your win. P.S. Awtry December 9, 2018 at 9:49 PM thank you :)

Eve Roper October 24, 2018 at 8:35 PM congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest.. P.S. Awtry October 24, 2018 at 9:10 PM thx :)

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2018 at 11:59 PM ha I just saw Jan said the same as me P.S. Awtry October 24, 2018 at 12:32 AM :D

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2018 at 11:58 PM back with my congrats. would like to have seen this one placed higher up!!! P.S. Awtry October 24, 2018 at 12:32 AM Thank you, Andrea, for the visit and the compliment. :)

Jan Allison October 23, 2018 at 3:17 PM Such beautiful imagery, I personally would have rated this higher:-)Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx P.S. Awtry October 23, 2018 at 4:14 PM What a nice thing to say! Thank you :)

Line Gauthier October 23, 2018 at 10:50 AM Lovely, PS. You captured an exquisite moment. Congrats on your win. A FAVE for me. P.S. Awtry October 23, 2018 at 4:15 PM I am so glad you liked it. That means a lot! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen October 23, 2018 at 2:20 AM - Congratulations on your great Charlieku, P.S. :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) P.S. Awtry October 23, 2018 at 6:06 PM Thank you Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich October 18, 2018 at 6:16 PM I love how you did your set of these. One of the best sets i have seen so far. P.S. Awtry October 18, 2018 at 8:13 PM Andrea, thank you. You made my day :)

Caren Krutsinger October 14, 2018 at 1:24 AM P.S., Your imagery is remarkable, refined, and rippling. P.S. Awtry October 14, 2018 at 9:47 AM thank you, Caren!