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Blue Pool

blue pool
of water
rippling mirror 

lacy white 
flower petals
floating 

dancing 
as the wind
engages them

soft fragrant breeze
gently strokes
my face

eyes closed
long deep breath
moment savored




Charlieku 4-3-2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  Charles Messina
Date:  October 13, 2018

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Line Gauthier Date: 12/10/2018 7:54:00 PM Lovely, PS. Congrats on your well deserved to win. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/10/2018 8:25:00 PM thank you, Line :)

Wren Rushing Date: 12/9/2018 9:08:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 12/9/2018 9:49:00 PM thank you :)

Eve Roper Date: 10/24/2018 8:35:00 PM congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest.. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 10/24/2018 9:10:00 PM thx :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/23/2018 11:59:00 PM ha I just saw Jan said the same as me Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 AM :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/23/2018 11:58:00 PM back with my congrats. would like to have seen this one placed higher up!!! Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 AM Thank you, Andrea, for the visit and the compliment. :)

Jan Allison Date: 10/23/2018 3:17:00 PM Such beautiful imagery, I personally would have rated this higher:-)Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 10/23/2018 4:14:00 PM What a nice thing to say! Thank you :)

Line Gauthier Date: 10/23/2018 10:50:00 AM Lovely, PS. You captured an exquisite moment. Congrats on your win. A FAVE for me. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 10/23/2018 4:15:00 PM I am so glad you liked it. That means a lot! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/23/2018 2:20:00 AM - Congratulations on your great Charlieku, P.S. :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 10/23/2018 6:06:00 PM Thank you Anne-Lise!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/18/2018 6:16:00 PM I love how you did your set of these. One of the best sets i have seen so far. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 10/18/2018 8:13:00 PM Andrea, thank you. You made my day :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 10/14/2018 1:24:00 AM P.S., Your imagery is remarkable, refined, and rippling. Login to Reply P.S. Awtry Date: 10/14/2018 9:47:00 AM thank you, Caren!