Get Your Premium Membership

blue pool

blue pool of water rippling mirror lacy white flower petals floating dancing as the wind engages them soft fragrant breeze gently strokes my face eyes closed long deep breath moment savored
Charlieku 4-3-2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Charles Messina Date: October 13, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/10/2018 7:54:00 PM
Lovely, PS. Congrats on your well deserved to win.
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 12/10/2018 8:25:00 PM
thank you, Line :)
Date: 12/9/2018 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 12/9/2018 9:49:00 PM
thank you :)
Date: 10/24/2018 8:35:00 PM
congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest..
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/24/2018 9:10:00 PM
thx :)
Date: 10/23/2018 11:59:00 PM
ha I just saw Jan said the same as me
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 AM
:D
Date: 10/23/2018 11:58:00 PM
back with my congrats. would like to have seen this one placed higher up!!!
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/24/2018 12:32:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, for the visit and the compliment. :)
Date: 10/23/2018 3:17:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery, I personally would have rated this higher:-)Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/23/2018 4:14:00 PM
What a nice thing to say! Thank you :)
Date: 10/23/2018 10:50:00 AM
Lovely, PS. You captured an exquisite moment. Congrats on your win. A FAVE for me.
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/23/2018 4:15:00 PM
I am so glad you liked it. That means a lot! :)
Date: 10/23/2018 2:20:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, P.S. :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/23/2018 6:06:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise!
Date: 10/18/2018 6:16:00 PM
I love how you did your set of these. One of the best sets i have seen so far.
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/18/2018 8:13:00 PM
Andrea, thank you. You made my day :)
Date: 10/14/2018 1:24:00 AM
P.S., Your imagery is remarkable, refined, and rippling.
Login to Reply
AWTRY Avatar
P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/14/2018 9:47:00 AM
thank you, Caren!