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blue jay perches on rose

blue jay perches on rose looking at empty bird bath... a very dry fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 10/8/2012 2:57:00 PM
Yes, this is a sure way to depict a dry fall! We have had some good rains this fall so I'm not disappointed with the weather we've been having! Just hope that this winder is a dry one though! I know where you live there aren't too many bad winter days, but where I live we can have quite a few if it's a bad winter! Anyway, this is a fabulous write my friend, I really enjoyed it! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/8/2012 2:14:00 PM
Yes, that is very indicative of dry fall! Gives a good picture of that blue jay!!
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Date: 10/8/2012 10:06:00 AM
An interesting natural sequence. It has the acerbic wit and irony of an ancient, Japanese haiku.
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Date: 10/8/2012 8:47:00 AM
Very descriptive dear Sara... kudos! Have a great week ahead! Love and hugs, Jack
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Date: 10/8/2012 7:27:00 AM
Beautiful haiku here Sara.Love this.
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