Blue Hole

She's got a big blue hole In her soul Where she stores all her tears And her fears The place where she goes to When she's blue Red hole is for anger Within her Where she stores raging ire Livid fire When she's mad, she goes there That's quite rare There's a black hole within Makes her spin Where she stores dark desires Sin's wildfires She goes there when she shouldn't Wish she wouldn't The white hole is for love Of God 'bove Where she stores her heart's dreams Tender schemes This is where she's now found Where she's crowned This white hole makes her feel Helps her heal It grows bigger in size As she tries To flush out other holes From her soul 05.29.2021
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Goldsmith Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Love how you did the different colors. A fav. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Liguori Avatar
November 21, 2021 at 10:01 AM
Thank you for entering the contest. Congrats on your placement. Robert
Kauffman Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Very clever take on the theme, Jo, especially the last stanza! Love does "flush" away the residue left by the blackness, anger and tears. Really nice use of color to express emotion. Congratulations on your win!
Edmonds  Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on your win with this remarkable write Jo… Belle
Roper Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. <3
Alex Avatar
June 5, 2021 at 7:33 AM
A Poem from the depths. Congratulations!
Theraven Avatar
June 3, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Hello Jo, The heart; poetry's best friend. Yours reached a zenith at the end of May. Your poem taking on water. Hoping for healing in holes patched. I hope your ship makes it to golden shores one day. -Richard
Y. Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 12:32 PM
WoW! Jo, This is a well written and creative entry for the contest. I liked it a lot. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis
Goff Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 7:07 AM
Yes, one can associate with this myriad of emotions, well done, Jo!
Callus Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 2:21 PM
This is lovely and creative, Jo. If it's for a contest I hope to see it on the winners' list! ~ Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 8:43 AM
Great entry, Jo, never would had thought of a blue hole in their heart. You did very well in writing the verse. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Ibeh Avatar
June 1, 2021 at 5:50 AM
Fantastic piece, Jo:-) Good luck in the contest!
Poet Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Hi, Joe, what a superb write, you shed the light on every kind of hole( blue, black and white) in relation to the different emotions. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 1:21 PM
wow that was a REALLY creative approach to the Blue Hole theme. WELL DONE
May Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 7:49 AM
Finding the one that makes her whole, Very nicely penned Jo
Cunningham Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 3:08 AM
Very creative Jo using different colours. Good luck and enjoy your weekend Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 1:19 AM
Wow, you matched colors with emotions. So very well done. Hugs
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