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Blue Hole

She's got a big blue hole In her soul Where she stores all her tears And her fears The place where she goes to When she's blue Red hole is for anger Within her Where she stores raging ire Livid fire When she's mad, she goes there That's quite rare There's a black hole within Makes her spin Where she stores dark desires Sin's wildfires She goes there when she shouldn't Wish she wouldn't The white hole is for love Of God 'bove Where she stores her heart's dreams Tender schemes This is where she's now found Where she's crowned This white hole makes her feel Helps her heal It grows bigger in size As she tries To flush out other holes From her soul 05.29.2021

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Date: 11/25/2021 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. Love how you did the different colors. A fav. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/21/2021 10:01:00 AM
Thank you for entering the contest. Congrats on your placement. Robert
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Date: 6/7/2021 1:29:00 PM
Very clever take on the theme, Jo, especially the last stanza! Love does "flush" away the residue left by the blackness, anger and tears. Really nice use of color to express emotion. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/6/2021 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this remarkable write Jo… Belle
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Date: 6/5/2021 10:37:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win. <3
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Date: 6/5/2021 7:33:00 AM
A Poem from the depths. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/3/2021 8:29:00 AM
Hello Jo, The heart; poetry's best friend. Yours reached a zenith at the end of May. Your poem taking on water. Hoping for healing in holes patched. I hope your ship makes it to golden shores one day. -Richard
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:32:00 PM
WoW! Jo, This is a well written and creative entry for the contest. I liked it a lot. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 6/2/2021 7:07:00 AM
Yes, one can associate with this myriad of emotions, well done, Jo!
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Date: 6/1/2021 2:21:00 PM
This is lovely and creative, Jo. If it's for a contest I hope to see it on the winners' list! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/1/2021 8:43:00 AM
Great entry, Jo, never would had thought of a blue hole in their heart. You did very well in writing the verse. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/1/2021 5:50:00 AM
Fantastic piece, Jo:-) Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 5/31/2021 2:41:00 PM
Hi, Joe, what a superb write, you shed the light on every kind of hole( blue, black and white) in relation to the different emotions. I wish you good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/30/2021 1:21:00 PM
wow that was a REALLY creative approach to the Blue Hole theme. WELL DONE
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Date: 5/30/2021 7:49:00 AM
Finding the one that makes her whole, Very nicely penned Jo
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Date: 5/30/2021 3:08:00 AM
Very creative Jo using different colours. Good luck and enjoy your weekend Tom
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Date: 5/30/2021 1:19:00 AM
Wow, you matched colors with emotions. So very well done. Hugs
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