Blue Flock

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Remembering the blue irises that grew so prolifically in my grandmother's backyard

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ this early spring evening gives flight to a blue flock

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Stephan McBride

Date: 4/20/2024 7:02:00 AM

Beautiful pictures , and love how they grow so excited in One Flock : )

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/20/2024 5:38:00 PM

thanks, Stephan, for stopping by and for appreciating my use of the word 'flock' in describing a group of blue irises. Wishing you a blessed evening, Sara

Jeanette Swan

Date: 4/19/2024 12:42:00 AM

Love the flower-birds, and the memory. J :)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/19/2024 4:50:00 AM

thank you, Jeanette. Much appreciate your visits and comments. Have a lovely day, hugs, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/18/2024 8:19:00 PM

Very nicely penned Monoku, with great imagery, I think by flock you meant aroma and also blue collection.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/19/2024 4:50:00 AM

thanks, Sotto, for your visit and comments...yes, flock = aroma and blue collection. :-) Have a splendid day, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara