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Blue Eyes

Blue- SPARKLES from my twinkling eyes, contrasting BLACK pupils to reveal to her my attraction! Blue- you will no longer be the BEAT within my lonely spirit, for lemon YELLOW citron eyes fill my shadowed corridors. Blue- Your Midnight is scented with PUNGENT aromas, I desire the brilliance of WHITE morning glories! Blue- Allow the SALTINESS of her ocean to grace my tongue, let me float upon tumultuous waves and gaze up at a SILVER moon. Blue- so DESPERATELY felt, revealing everything I long for, yet I am doomed to see in shades of GREY Her spirit Sparkles with the ferocity of a diamond black feline! My heart beat skipping, as I gaze into her lemon yellow citrine eyes. The pungent aromas of pheromones enticing my being. White passion pulsating deep within my minds eye. I long to lick the saltiness from the small of her arching back.. Silver moon beams bathe the room and I relish what my eyes see! Desperately I attempt to see beyond the shades of grey--- for the thing I desire most has always been, COLOUR! By Richard Lamoureux Thanks for the challenge Tammy!

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Ayesha Karim

Date: 2/11/2016 9:48:00 PM

This poem is lyrical! Thank you for sharing this on Poetry Soup!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/12/2016 2:09:00 AM

Thanks Ayesha.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/14/2015 9:59:00 PM

This is so well written Richard. Congratulations on your wonderful win!

Laura Hay

Date: 11/12/2015 2:04:00 PM

A wonderfully sparkling poem, well done and congrats, warm regards, Laura.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/13/2015 7:48:00 PM

Thanks Laura.;0)

Michael Tor

Date: 11/11/2015 9:03:00 PM

A well deserved win Richard. Congratulations!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Michael.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 11/11/2015 4:37:00 PM

Congratulations in your win Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:10:00 AM

Thanks Nayda.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/11/2015 2:20:00 PM

Romantic color fills this winning page..Congrats!! Sara

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:11:00 AM

Thanks Sara.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/11/2015 11:33:00 AM

I adored this on first read Richard - congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:12:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug back to you.

Lu Loo

Date: 11/11/2015 10:36:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved win!! -LU:)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:13:00 AM

Thanks Laura.

James Inman

Date: 11/11/2015 10:02:00 AM

What a great write Richard! Such colorful shades of desire, well done.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:13:00 AM

Thanks James.

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2015 9:44:00 AM

Good morning, Richard, love the way you see everything in vivid color. Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:14:00 AM

Ironic considering I'm coloured blind.

Lin Lane

Date: 11/11/2015 9:01:00 AM

Very nicely written, Richard. Just the right touch of sensual innuendo. Congratulations.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:15:00 AM

Thanks Lin Lane.

Tammy Reams

Date: 11/11/2015 7:58:00 AM

Congrats on your win Richard! I loved the yellow citrine eyes. Thank you for entering into my contest that was difficult.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:17:00 AM

Good morning and a big thanks for choosing this one. I hope I got your form right.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/9/2015 9:30:00 AM

Your eyes are not only beautiful in color, Rick, but they see beauty..... HI!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/12/2015 6:18:00 AM

Hi Eileen, sorry for the delayed response, it's hard getting a proper internet connection where we ar staying.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/28/2015 8:05:00 PM

enchanted by this piece, rich.. i can't seem to make one and here you are, creating a verse so effortlessly rendered!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/28/2015 8:13:00 PM

I'm glad it came out looking effortless, I really struggled with this one. Your response to it makes me smile. I'm not even sure I got it right but I still am pleased with the end result. Hugs back to you. It was even harder because I am Coloured blind.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/28/2015 7:24:00 AM

Love this Richard your creative side shines with this awesome write my friend. Been really busy practicing for a classic rock band as a drummer. Working too. And following my fellow poets is difficult. Catching up my friend. Stay well my friend.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/28/2015 8:05:00 AM

Sounds like fun Michael.

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/27/2015 4:10:00 PM

Excellent write Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/28/2015 8:06:00 AM

Thanks Ken.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/27/2015 11:27:00 AM

I think everyone who read and understood the contest is a winner. Your write is very clever and I enjoyed it, but I still don't understand the contest so I wrote nothing. No jokes - very creative and impressive - the poem and understanding the contest ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2015 1:50:00 PM

Thanks, it was a bit of a mind bender and I'm still not sure if I got it right.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/27/2015 9:25:00 AM

Oh.....that ending.....you know how to bring things round to a climax. Great work. Good luck in the contest....thanks for the visit and hugs. Seems like both of us have our muses on holiday....

Eileen Manassian
Date: 10/27/2015 1:00:00 PM

I posted an older poem just now.....I can't write....or get back into the swing of things...Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2015 9:59:00 AM

I've been trying to touch base with all the poets who I've not had time to read. Sometimes time seems impossible to manage.

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/27/2015 7:37:00 AM

Love the buildup then the runaway train second half. Nicely done, Richard- good luck in the contest! Regards, Viv

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2015 7:41:00 AM

Thanks Viv!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/27/2015 7:12:00 AM

Fantastic! You embraced all the senses so wonderfully!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2015 7:43:00 AM

Good morning Monterey. Thanks :0)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/27/2015 12:18:00 AM

your work colors my world, rich... enticed!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/27/2015 7:44:00 AM

Thanks and a big hug back to you Nette.

Skat A

Date: 10/26/2015 5:43:00 PM

One Word ""WOW"" SKAT

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2015 8:34:00 PM

Works for me;0) thanks SKAT

Dalia Shahein

Date: 10/26/2015 3:15:00 PM

Wow!! This poem is a breath taking....I'm so glad I had the chance to read it....beautiful , pure and true touchy words....hugs :D

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2015 8:35:00 PM

I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks Dalia.

Elis Artis

Date: 10/26/2015 2:21:00 PM

WOW! This...This, this is a masterpiece! I'm not just throwing the term wildly or anything. This is truly a masterpiece! It's clever, unique and so creative. It feels so dream-like with all the hypnotizing vivid colors. Good luck in the contest! This is a winner in my book

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2015 2:43:00 PM

Thanks Elis, what a thoughtful comment.

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/26/2015 10:32:00 AM

Took me a few moments to realize that this is for the COLOR Contest. I then had an idea that you'll go through the senses road, as I've read before from one of your old writes about your being color blind. I am not disappointed. This is so sensual, even a legally blind would be able to appreciate all the colors described. Awesome piece, Rick! hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2015 10:47:00 AM

Thanks Kim, it was a fun challange.