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Blue Eyes

The rain patters down Sending goose bumps across flesh My blue lips are numb Her azure eyes shine Like crystals catching the sun Even in this rain My hide is soaked It is on the line for her The cold bite goes numb Drawn in my jacket Her eyes beaming at me Blue eyed paradise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 4/17/2024 12:52:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/8/2016 1:15:00 PM
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Date: 7/4/2013 12:19:00 AM
"tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"
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Date: 6/28/2013 8:46:00 AM
Lovely poem. Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:46:00 AM
- Well written haiku, Zach ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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