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'blue Crane - Mating Ritual'

blue crane undeterred
wings flap and emotions spurred
raspy sounds are heard


Contest: What's the Buzz
3rd Place

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Kash Poet

Date: 3/11/2011 8:27:00 AM

Love it!Congrats Wilma on your well deserved win!--kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2011 4:00:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Elaine George

Date: 3/10/2011 12:19:00 PM

Paints a very beautiful picture, Wilma. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

John Freeman

Date: 3/10/2011 10:31:00 AM

Such a pleasure to see you Wilma near the top with this worthy third place beauty. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/10/2011 9:31:00 AM

You already know how much I admire this poem, Wilma, so just let me add my congratulations for your win! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/10/2011 6:20:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in my contest Wilma. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/10/2011 12:13:00 AM

many congrats dear friend.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/9/2011 5:11:00 PM

Glad to see this one of yours a winner, Wilma. Congratulations to you

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/9/2011 4:13:00 PM

We have the blue crane here but I have not witnessed his mating ritual. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 2:32:00 PM

Congrats Wilma my friend on your wonderful success in Carol's contest luv.. with this expressive and energetic entry .. enjoy another top ten sweet success with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/9/2011 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations on the third place win in the contest of carol, Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 2:09:00 PM

Wilma, I remember this one. Glad to see it in the winner circle. Congratulations, dear.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/5/2011 1:17:00 PM

Lovely haiku, Wilma. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/4/2011 1:30:00 PM

Seems you have had busy week too... I love this write my dear Wilma... your a true Poet and more...love Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/3/2011 4:14:00 PM

I'm going to ask Dane Ann to read this, Wilma. She photographs and paints these birds. I know she'll love your poem! Love, Carolyn

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2011 3:08:00 PM

Note to James, must mimic this bird to attract a bird. If I have to stand on one leg, I'm a goner, hehe. Nice Haiku Wilma....:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2011 11:38:00 PM

AHA, it's mating time! Love the raspy sounds line, Wilma. Let me see what else new you migh thave cooked up here today!

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/2/2011 4:58:00 PM

love it Wilma. great one for the contest. Cranes are COOL ! :) thanks for your comments.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2011 3:56:00 PM

Haven't seen the blue cranes mating, Wilma, but did see ducks flapping about with "emotions spurred." Sure hope you entered this creative haiku in Carol's contest. Wishing you a big win! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/2/2011 3:08:00 PM

Lovely flight of emotions, Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/2/2011 11:58:00 AM

Like being there and I have never seen this one..Reads like winning material..Enjoyed..Good luck in the contest...Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 3/2/2011 7:41:00 AM

A fantastic Haiku dear poet ! One of my favorite birds Wilma, is the, Blue Crane ! Awesome ! much love, james

Daver Austin

Date: 3/2/2011 7:32:00 AM

Exotic? No, but well done. Love, daver

Kash Poet

Date: 3/2/2011 6:36:00 AM

A wonderful moment you have captured so effectively here ,Wilma-kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/2/2011 5:53:00 AM

Well this is certainly exotic Wilma and a very precious ritual am sure to the blue crane.. a romance all it's own luv..good luck in the new contest my friend.. awesome as always..

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