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Blue Birds

Blue Bird Builds nest Gathers Straw, hair Carefully place items for comfort Guards, protects, warms eggs, feeds baby birds Still work in progress.... I just changed from Tyburn to Free Verse I will just rewrite a Tyburn.. When I looked again, I have written a Tyburn before It is not easy..
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Horne Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 12:26 PM
Lovely piece, whatever the form, my friend. I wrote a tyburn for a Soup contest once and it was pretty hard. I thought you made a great job of the baby bird tyburn
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2012 at 3:43 PM
well, I am not exactly sure what it is, but it looks like you are progressing nicely!! Love those blue birds!
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 10:17 PM
Hi Sara, I love this form. My first time reading a tyburn. I enjoyed reading. Blessings, Rhonda
Anish Avatar
February 25, 2012 at 9:06 PM
Is the poem a "work in progress" or is it the nest? Fine nature writing an any event. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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