Blue Birds

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Blue Bird Builds nest Gathers Straw, hair Carefully place items for comfort Guards, protects, warms eggs, feeds baby birds Still work in progress.... I just changed from Tyburn to Free Verse I will just rewrite a Tyburn.. When I looked again, I have written a Tyburn before It is not easy..

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Jack Horne

Date: 2/27/2012 12:26:00 PM

Lovely piece, whatever the form, my friend. I wrote a tyburn for a Soup contest once and it was pretty hard. I thought you made a great job of the baby bird tyburn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2012 3:43:00 PM

well, I am not exactly sure what it is, but it looks like you are progressing nicely!! Love those blue birds!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/25/2012 10:17:00 PM

Hi Sara, I love this form. My first time reading a tyburn. I enjoyed reading. Blessings, Rhonda

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/25/2012 9:06:00 PM

Is the poem a "work in progress" or is it the nest? Fine nature writing an any event. Peace & Love Matthew Anish