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Blue Bird of Paradise

Climbing the irregular hillside where the air was hot,
In the middle of the montane forest,
The atmosphere was tropical and so too hot.
I started my climb hoping for better fresh air,
When suddenly I saw the most beautiful bird,
Flying towards the upper branches of rainbow eucalyptus.

It was not a small bird and was so colourful,
Solid bright blue color for its wings
And tail with split eye ring and bluish-white bill. 
Its wings occasionally display a red tinge.

I was told that it is one of the most beautiful
Birds called Blue Bird of Paradise, and I’m sure
It must have descended from above with bliss.

Suddenly it hung upside down, wondering why.
It did not sing but uttered a soft buzzing noise.
Slowly it fanned its feathers, an attraction to another bird.
Soon I realized this was his way to start to mate.
Silently I tiptoed down the hill and hoped
He’ll be successful in his lovemaking.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 1:17 PM
haha. I like the ending. So cute, Victor.
Chuuk Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 1:17 PM
Beautiful poem, beautiful bird.
DiMino Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 12:07 PM
Love this, Victor. Lovely poetry: this link will take you to Jan Peerce singing "Blue Bird of Happiness" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7GLpGjhr0Xo&ab_channel=EdmundStAustell
Fowler Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 12:03 PM
I love this Victor. hugs :)
Roper Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 10:41 AM
Beautiful verse you walked me threw to see a stunning bird. Blessings friend
Callus Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Yours is a very descriptive and informative poem, Victor. The blue bird of Paradise is undoubtedly one of the most beautiful birds. ~ I'd not mind some of that 'hot air' you mention...these past days it's been too cols for me here! ~ Regards // paul
Edmonds  Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 9:07 AM
A beautiful poem for the beautiful bird-of-paradise Victor, would love to see one… Belle
Tor Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Love yor bluebird theme my friend. Have to catch up on your Poetry Victor...
Daniel Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Stunning as the bird itself, Victor:)
Mcintosh Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 2:46 AM
Beautiful bird, amazing to see. God bless you with love, Gina
Cunningham Avatar
January 31, 2023 at 12:16 AM
They are so pleasing to the eye with their stunning colours. Tom
Horsman Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 9:17 PM
Love how you relate this gem of a poem, to us all Victor. Never seen the 'Blue bird of paradise. would love to. Harry
George Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 8:43 PM
What a lucid and meticulous description of the blue bird of paradise! I have seen this bird in Planet Earth. An eye catching view especially when one invites its mate by spreading its colorful plumes. Really enjoyed this poem, dear Victor!
Buehler Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 6:40 PM
It's so nice to read about this exotic, beautiful bird, of which I was previously unaware. A delightful poem, and I love the picture, too. :)
Volumes Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 6:27 PM
l am not a fan of Free Verse, but this a lovely Victor.
Pandit Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Beautiful bird and beautiful poem, Victor. Much enjoyed.
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Now that is care for the other species in nature. I enjoyed reading this one. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. I will have to look up Bird of Paradise. I bought a canon lily that was called bird of paradise, but it was disappointing according to the picture that they used representing it. Sara
Rose  Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 11:41 AM
you are an observant wonderful poet Victor, you don't miss much that makes you a great one
Eslinger Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 9:49 AM
I have a deep love for birds. They are my primary subject as a visual artist. So, Victor, i’m so happy i came by to begin my day reading this lovely, very visual poem of yours. Hugs! Thank you!
May Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 7:50 AM
A wonderful story Victor, Very nicely penned
Poet Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Victor, this is a lovely poem with a lot of aesthetically pleasing nuances, and it also conveys some really emotional thoughts.
Andresen Avatar
January 30, 2023 at 6:58 AM
- A beautiful bird ... wish I had seen it - Beautiful poem, Victor :) - hugs
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