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Poetry/Quatrain/Blue Bird-Of-Paradise
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Human Written

Written, October 27, 2024
For the International Contest, Bird-of-Paradise
Sponsor, Suzette Richards, Judged 11/02/2024

Third Place

blue bird of paradise

Blue Bird-Of-Paradise

 

Creatures of whimsy floating, passion airing,
falling to Earth from God is the myth and prayer.
The male’s tails dance with intricate plumage details,
a quite ornate bird in the tropical forest with haunting wails.

birdquatrain

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2024 10:34:00 AM

congrats for your win with this awesome poem, Soupmail for you again.

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2024 5:50:00 PM

Anrea, thank you for the congrats and compliment, love Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/2/2024 6:56:00 AM

I can feel the emotion! A beauty! Congratulations, Constance!

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2024 8:37:00 AM

Kim, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, love Constance

Suzette Richards

Date: 11/2/2024 1:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your 3rd place win, Constance. I enjoyed and appreciated the fact that you had incorporated the mythology surrounding the Bird-of-Paradise, seamlessly weaving a captivating poem. The trailing rhyme (airing/prayer) was perfectly executed. See my soup mail for details to claim your prize.

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2024 3:31:00 AM

Suzette, thank you so much for the contest and my placement, appreciate. I loved writing this poem, love Constance

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/2/2024 1:05:00 AM

hauntingly beautiful dear poet friend. congratulations on your win. Cheers!!!

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2024 3:32:00 AM

Thriveni, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, love Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/2/2024 12:25:00 AM

Love this, Constance. Big congrats

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2024 3:32:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for the compliment and congrats, love Constance

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/28/2024 11:43:00 AM

How are feeling, Constance? Thinking of you. I've sent you a soup mail. Hugs x

Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2024 12:24:00 PM

SU, to be honest I am not doing well, I miss Snuggles so much, she is in every corner of my apartment. It will just take some time. I will check your email. love Constance

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 10/28/2024 3:09:00 AM

I watched many bird videos and these are my favourite birds, magical and beautiful. Good luck with the contest , Constance. Happy new week.

Constance La France
Date: 10/28/2024 12:25:00 PM

Zyool, they are so magical and beautiful, thank you for the comment and encouragement, love Constance

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/27/2024 7:10:00 PM

This seems to be a very unusual bird. The long tail reminds me of the roadrunner. Good luck with the contest.

Constance La France
Date: 10/27/2024 10:48:00 PM

Hilda, thank you for your comment and encouragement, appreciate. There are hundreds of species of Bird-Of -Paradise birds, each one unique, love Constance