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Blue and Gold

Morning Glories twine
the trellis in blue splendor
While the Daffodils
tickle the feet of the vines
with golden trumpet fingers



Placement: 1st

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James Fraser

April 12, 2011 at 11:05 AM

Lovely poetry Paula befitting it's top place in Rick's wonderful contest. The Daffodils are out in force in Inverness. Little yellow faces watching us, just awesome....:) smiles

John Freeman

March 23, 2011 at 8:15 PM

Great to see at the top Paula. Congratulations on your worthy poem's success in first place. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

March 23, 2011 at 1:38 PM

short but sweet, so glad you won with this wee gem! Light & Love

Robb A. Kopp

March 23, 2011 at 12:28 PM

A first pace floral arangement fit for the winners circle!

Carolyn Devonshire

March 23, 2011 at 8:42 AM

Such a beautiful picture, Paula. Love the way the daffodils "tickle" the vines with their "golden trumpet fingers." Congratulations on your first-place win! Love, Carolyn

Judy Konos

March 23, 2011 at 7:29 AM

Congratulations on your win....

Kash Poet

March 23, 2011 at 6:13 AM

Wonderful lines here"Daffodils tickle the feet of..". Congrats Paula on your 1st place win---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 23, 2011 at 4:53 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved 1st Place win Paula in ^Rick Parise's contest "Blue & Gold". Love, Carol

Eiken Laan

March 23, 2011 at 3:49 AM

Well done Paula, beautiful win:))

Andrea Dietrich

March 22, 2011 at 10:18 PM

wow, and yet ANOTHER marvelous one that I actually missed, and it came in TOP place. Way to go, Paula.

Tahera Mannan

March 22, 2011 at 8:52 PM

Such a wondeful image your poems bring forth. Very warm congrats for this win.

Harry Horsman

March 22, 2011 at 8:49 PM

Paula this is a wonderful poem, such imagery, congrats on your number one winner. Harry

Francine Roberts

March 22, 2011 at 4:24 PM

beautiful imagery, congats on your first place win in the contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 22, 2011 at 12:23 PM

Super congrats Paula on your first place win in blue and gold contest my friend with this awesome write depicting the colors so well ..enjoy that top spot where the air is so rare for a rare beauty entry luv..